I hope that this story isnt dead. I enjoyed reading it immensly and hope to be able to read more about Rick and Kate's adventures with the Elements.

adorable story!

I'm laughing so hard I'm crying.
Now I'm getting tears all over my iPad I better stop.

I say that you should start off with the Cult of the Cutie, The Mares Take Manhattan, then Mother's Day (with a twist added with Castle's mother getting transported to Ponyville, along with Alexis? Totally up to you for it is Your story and I'm just voicing an opinion here) Love what you've done with the story. Any chance of the rest of the precinct getting zapped to Ponyville too? The gang (Ryan, Espizito, Lanie) are looking at the statue and then one accidently touches it. Just another random thought.

Oh my god so many references!

Come backto this story. it was verrygood

That was another good one.

Quite cool with everyone occupied with something during our heroes' stay at Tydal's keep.

Really liked Beckett's conversation with Tydal.

And little surprise and at the same time no surprise he figured out her and Castle weren't always ponies.

Nice touch at the end with ponies and capricorns coming into Ponyville like a parade.

As well as the compensation he gave to Piles. Know what I mean?

And of course really liking Pinkie and her capricorn counterpart Coral starting festivities with their party weaponry.

Now that’s a sight I don’t believe anybody or anypony ever thought they’d see.

Princess Celestia and Luna being lectured and looking sheepish while being said lectured.

Needless to say by Tydal.

Proves it happens even to the best of us.

Just loved when Pinkie said stuff sounding like from Terminator and Monty Python and the Holy Grail.

That history lesson Celestia gave was very interesting.

And what a incredible story of how Tydal helped save Equestria from Discord before the big bad was turned into a stone statue for the first time.

Then Tydal to save his life from his injuries fighting Discord.
Loved the Gargoyles reference to it on the healing bit.

Was glad to see he got his own happy ending to this whole thing.
Tydal sure deserved it.

And how cool and funny it was seeing one of his daughters is like Pinkie.

Please don't tell me you're going to go Super Sendai Ponies with this one. No, of course you're not. The point is that the Equestrian version of MMPR is a children's story /built around the actual legend of the Immortal Elements/. So, there are clues there to what is going on.

FWIW, I wouldn't be surprised if there are 'super suits' in the gang's future; more specifically, some kind of mystical armour linked to the manifestation of the power of the Element. There will probably be specific and unique magic associated with it too. Twilight should be okay with it, Rarity should too because of her pretty thorough telekinesis. For those without conscious magic, though, it will probably be a bit daunting.

(NOTE: This review has been posted before anonymously - Sorry about that; my computer logs me out of occasionally without actually showing me as being logged out)

Aw, while I wished that Kate and Rick had stuck around in New York a bit longer, at least this way, they're with their friends. And Beckett's mom's case was put to rest, which is nice. Lord Tydal's musings on Discord were fascinating as well. :D

Please don't tell me you're going to go Super Sendai Ponies with this one. No, of course you're not. The point is that the Equestrian version of MMPR is a children's story /built around the actual legend of the Immortal Elements/. So, there are clues there to what is going on.

FWIW, I wouldn't be surprised if there are 'super suits' in the gang's future; more specifically, some kind of mystical armour linked to the manifestation of the power of the Element. There will probably be specific and unique magic associated with it too. Twilight should be okay with it, Rarity should too because of her pretty thorough telekinesis. For those without conscious magic, though, it will probably be a bit daunting.

solved the case alright 2 months of PAR TAY. And the references i love it, When the world is threatened by the evil Remo Repulso, Zorgon selects six fillies with attitude to become the Harmony Rangers. the book about the fox ninja, Awesome simply awesome. And i love granny smith pears are plotting against us evil fruit trying to rule the world. Excellent chapter my friend bravo.

Boy, that was a close one.

Twilight and her friends almost made a big mistake with Tydal.

Glad Castle and Beckett figured things out about him before the girls blasted him.

And what a pleasant surprise he turned out to be The Teacher.

Mentor to Princess Celestia and Luna.

What a happy reunion for all three.

Another great chapter.

Woah what an ending! Gave me chills!

And Beckett's 'everypony' had me cracking up, especially her and Castle's responses.

"Of course not!" Castle added in her defense.
"Because that would be crazy."
"Really crazy!"
"100% crazy."

Oh man, laughing so hard. :) I can't wait for more!

Zan

Mr. Chaos, you leave me wanting to say a phrase that I would be unable to enunciate in Ponyville. But as that would be exceedingly unladylike, I shan't. Temporary vegetarianism is a logical side-effect. Whether it's temporary or permanent, too soon to tell. Twilight is starting to ask questions she should have asked before, good. And obviously Celestia's mother's reasons for taking Castle and Beckett to Equestria when she did were twofold (knowing Her, probably sixfold or tenfold): not only did they need to assist in Tydal's resurrection, but Beckett could not have been professionally subjective in dealing with her mother's killer.