Firstly,

Let me introduce myself. My name is Victoria Bray, but I go by Tory (probably because of my love for Virals). Firstly this story has nothing to do with 'Virals' AT ALL. Secondly, you badly need to spell check your work.

I commonly recommend that you take your story down before someone reports it for being in the incorrect category and I think that you should:

A) Work on FictionPress dot Net. Because that is a place where you may post anything. On FanFiction you must post within the category of the work. Which this is not.

B) Please spell check your work. Grammar and spelling. You have horrible spelling and grammar, I'm shocked that people can read this. Could you please get a Beta Reader?

C) Grow up. After reading this I bet that you will go and cry about it. I can be mean with my reviews but that's so I can help people with there work.

Your truly,

Victoria Jane 'Tory' Bray

I hope you continue this I love it. I think its a great story so far and I can't wait to read more.

I'm sorry, this has next to nothing to do with Virals. You're too young to be writing on this site.

i am taking up your story for adoption its olerato

WHAT WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS IM GONNA DIE WITHOUT THEM
LOVE
OLERATO RAPHANE

one day it will be olerato , emily and ben!

josie and harry relantionship yay !1

so cute

olerato here you made a mistake with tanii you wrote crunch not crush

I LOVE U HARRY RYDER!
HOOOOOOOOOOT
but Lucas im sorry about ur ur childhood now ur EPIC!

love olerato

this is amazing as my bessie would say emily-grace elizabeth cunnifile or however you spell your name
love
Olerato Oprah Raphane

sorry but what does this have anything to do with Virals?

Like it :D

Hi Emily,
good story so far carry on updating and your idea was a bit too
like Dishonored but it was good so make sure to include it!
Aidan

Hello plumcakes, its Jaz from school.

I just want to say that I hope you have not really captured a guy called Ben, cause duck tape hurts (trust me, I have 5 older bros. sisters, i know) so yeah...

THE SLENDERMAN ID COMING FOR YOU EMILY D

i really like your story! but... you might want to have a spell check. It doesn't make a very good first impression if the title and summary has a misspelling :P. ON your profile go t publish;Manage Stories;Freeks! and from then on you can edit. update soon! .

can i have ben pretty please?! :D how's having a beta working out?