A really great start to this. I hope you are planning to continue it.

I had no idea that you wrote for Trixie Belden! I went and looked at your profile and when I saw that you wrote in this fandom too i almost jumped out of my seat with excitement. I love Trixie Belden and think it is a bit under appreciated. As I always say, keep writing. Peace, love, chocolate and books!

Nice. I could definitely see this as being some of Dan's background. The dialogue between Dan and Regan was spot on. Great story/chapter.