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| Reviews for Esther and the Moving Castle |
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  Guest 9/23/12 . chapter 3 AHHHHHHHHHHH!YOU NEED TO CONTINUE. I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! |
| Meg 8/28/12 . chapter 2 I'm sorry but your grammar is terrible. It's such a shame, it would be a good story if I could understand it... |
 Skyerider 8/9/12 . chapter 3Very good so far! You are making good progress! You seem to be a good writer and proofreader, congrats! I curious to see how Howl and Sophie fit in to this, so I'll keep reading! |
| Skyerider 8/8/12 . chapter 1 Good story so far. The paragraph struture could use a little work. You are blocking all the sentences into one huge mess and it makes it hard for the reader. You seemed to get it right there at the end, so keep at it. I want to see where this story goes! |
| GeminiCrystal 8/8/12 . chapter 1 awww this is such a good story (so far) i love howls moving castle |
