OMG snakes in love! yet there is little OOC'ness. I'm not a big love story fan, but i like the action in the first half of the story ...and the rest was not bad :)can you do a bloody one? A.L. is under fanfic'ed .thanks

This fanfic is very cool!

Ah... 'Twas everything I'd hoped for, and more! I find myself both sweetly satisfied, and eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

"Hello. daughter."
'Oy, the poor Snakes'. If those words aren't expected to be heard, that's a surefire sign of impending doom no matter what the special occasion is.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sweet Fic! It's been a while since I have read anything for Alien Legion, since I try to stick to X-Men and the such, but this one was pretty well written! Keep it up! :)

Ohhhh, my... This story is GREAT! I read the Alien Legion comics back in the 80's, and I have to say you've captured the characters perfectly! And the new characters are a joy to read as well. I'm eagerly awaiting the big wedding chapter... and I sincerely hope the story doesn't stop there! I'm military myself and married to another military member, and I know all too well that the adventures, heartaches, moments of joy and laughter, and general craziness that go with the lifestyle just don't stop at the altar...

Ohhhh. Nice one. This IS a great story. I don't know much about this "Alien Legion", but this fsn fiction is a great introduction to it. So many species, so many emotions, so many areas. This is an absolutely superb piece of work.

Spike: I've been reading this fic, its really good.
Please try to save it for future readers.

Carl: Please help us out here, let fanfiction live!

~Ethan

After a thorough reading I thought that was bloody good. Well done!!!
Yes you'll have to take it away as Mr Potts himself is having to get strict over unregulated fan-fic due to copywright laws. A shame coz we need stuff like this to keep interest in Alien Legion alive.

First off, long-time reader of Christi's work.

That said, here's the review:

I vaguely recall this comic book, but from what I'm reading in this story, I'm shocked I didn't go for it when it was still being published! Christi's done a fantastic job here: weaving two characters around one another in that style of hers that just blows me away! Emotions, reactions, and the sheer scope are great from start to end (well, of the current chapter, anyway). This is one of her best works to-date, and I can't wait to see the finish... and more! Fabulous work, hon! Can't wait for more! ^_^

This story is turning our marvelously. I love the way Sarigar and Jaikira are behaving and interacting; you can feel an entire lifetime of experiences beneath the both of them, and the way they interact and play off of each other is brilliantly real.
The action so far's been great, and the entire setup has been fascinating and rewarding. I've never even heard of Alien Legion, but Christi's fabulous writing, with such an obvious enjoyment of the source material, makes that a moot point. Wonderfully done. I can't wait to read more.