That was intense. I've always admired your skill for writing dark scenes like this one.

Oh yeah, and cliffhangers too. :) glad you're still updating! Sorry if I don't review anything until July, exams are coming up and I need to finish an entire course before June 7th.

Absofragginlutely FANTASTIC! Three chapters so far - no Chance anywhere in sight - and I love every word! And you know me, *that's* saying something! ;-)
This chapter - and indeed the whole episode so far - chillingly shows just how ruthless these two can be... and it's giving me goosebumps, especially the end of this chapter...

Good chapter. It was kinda nice to see Joubert and Baptiste bonding. Wonder if this female assassin will be meeting Chance?

LOL! Looks like Baptiste isn't quite cut out to become a bodyguard... good thing he didn't take Chance up on his offer to work for him then ;-). Vergy good chapter, as always. I love the irony of those two constantly having to save the man they actually want to kill themselves... and I'm still getting goosebumps every time I think of the nefarious plan the Old Man has for Ash...

Nice chapter. Wonder who the girl is? I have a feeling that we have not seen the last of her. I am certainly intrigued and cannot wait to read more. Great job as normal.

Heavens to Murgatroyd, what an opening chapter for the new episode! That not-so-subtle reminder of Joubert's true motives was definitely the fanfiction equivalent of a bucket of ice water over the head! This whole season gets more intense and more chilling with every new episode - and counting this one we still have three episodes to go... *gulp*.
I think it's absolutely fascinating how you manage to turn our(or at least my) perception of the Old Man so completely around in the space of just two sentences... I'm getting goosebumps just thinking of the possible ramifications...

Are these people really that oblivious to Ilsa interrogating them and leading them on with information she shouldn't have? Babbling on like that, you think he would've noticed.

I still admire Guerrero's efficiency. Keep up the good work :)

YAY! Way to go, girls! That's what I call a flawlessly executed plan... and I love it when a plan comes together ;-). Sorry, couldn't resist...

On the other hand... things get chillier and chillier with every new fact that Guerrero finds out about what Brax is really after... *gulp*.

Chance. Really you have a kid you should take better care of yourself.

This Delaware tax stuff is real? Now I know where I'm starting a business.

Keep up the awesome work!

Wonderful chapter, as always! And once again, Chance comes up with THE craziest plan imaginable... LOL. Well, at least it worked and they got the information needed for the girls to go through with their side of the plan.

It's a wonder how you manage to keep the episodes still fresh, intriguing and entertaining, even after all this time! Too bad you're not on FOX's payroll or they REALLY wouldn't have had an excuse to cancel the show ;-).

Well, whoever said you can't learn anything from fanfiction has obviously read the wrong stories ;-). I mean, if the topic is tax havens whoever would think of Delaware of all places... I love how much factual information you manage to scatter throughout your stories and still keep the chapters and episodes suspenseful and interesting, with the occasional bit of humor thrown in for good measuree.
And as usual I can't wait to find out what's and/or who is behind the threats against the professor and his organisation.

Welcome back, Good Chapter! It was well woth the wait. Poor Chance, people are always dying on him despite his best efforts to try and stop death. Wonder who this guy is? I am guessing not a professional or at least an assassin. Cannot wait to read and see where the rest of the story is going.

Ack, hope that real life is getting better. Changed email addresses so I'm pretty sure I'll get these on time now. Are we going to look back at Emma? Maybe in a side story? This new character is intriguing! :) keep up the awesome, and DON'T WORRY about taking your time.

Don't worry, I'm sure your regular readers will still be here however long it takes... with all that's going on right now, it's a wonder you manage to get anything written, let alone a wonderful chapter like this!

This is one of those awwwwwww... chapters, that make you want to jump right into the story... and as usual, at the end you manage to turn it around again with the almost hilariously inept attacker... can't wait to find out what exactly the guy is up to...

And I love that you even managed to work in Emma again... and her daughter... good to see that Guerrero is still keeping tabs on her.. with Emma one never knows...

Well, Ames and Ilsa "listened"...sort of... they did not set foot in the market place, but they proved their worth.

It would be very frustrating for someone with Ilsa wealth and power to be completely helpless in a situaiton like t his one.