This is an excellent short story. Meltdown was my favorite character in the game, too.

Good story, Cinder was one of my favorte charecters also. They should have more stories of the killer instint people, and it would be sweet if they made a newer game. I have Cinder in a Spawn story i'm writing, He is one of the best. Have fun writing.

Also a good story...just a matter of curiosity, though, are your stories supposed to be all in the same storyline?

man, this story rocks, I wish you would have been more detailed though

Cinder is my favorite character.