So good chapter! Keep updating :)

I love it! Very well written...

Yeahhh, thanks for updating! You have me so curious about this evil man and what he is planning to do. I hate when Severus tells little white lies to Lily because they will come back and bite him on the ass sooner or later.

Hope you are feeling better!

Good luck, Emma, Severus.

I'm enjoying your story, and will check out "Mourning Color." I'm anxiously reading to see what Severus really does, with regards to Lily.

Also, I feel for your loss of your flash drive. I have one that's a year old, and when I went to pull stories off it, to read them, the stupid thing indicated it was blank and unformated! GAH! Flash Drives! Even when you don't lose them, they're not reliable!

Good work, but you should have described how they made love to each other!

Very good, descriptive, symbolic chapter. Hopefully Severus will be able to fully explain to Lily about Emma and him being a spy soon. He's acting so emo and doom & gloom... even for him. Does he not think that if he explained to her what's really going on she may not leave him? Actually, I think your Lily wouldn't leave him. The only reason he'll lose her is if he pushes her away. That's partially what happened in his previous life. Now he has the chance to correct things AND get what he wants.

I also saw your play on numbers there.

Wow this is really good so far. Severus was always one of my favourite charcters in Harry Potter. He was so brave!

Excellent chapter well worth waiting for :)

love this story so much, waiting for the next chapter!

Talk about perfect timing...

I totally hate it when something wicked's hovering in the sky like a thundercloud waiting to burst. Then again, never was one for the quiet before the storm.

I'm sorry to hear that you're not well. I hope you get better soon! You take care of yourself, and the writing will come on its own. Don't rush before you're recovered! Your health is what matters most!

I have enjoyed your writing, and hope to enjoy more of it, when you are well again.

Please get well. And thank you for the story thus far. :)

Nice stop at the inn...but I can hear the Evil Music cueing up in the background.

That's wonderful about Snape's father!

And...Severus and Lily should just keeping driving down the road and never come back, not for years.