| Reviews for angel beats kingdom story |
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Ecila 4/21/13 . chapter 1 Ki! Not a bit OOC. Most stories where a number of characters go 'historic' or 'royal', people tend to make everyone to elagent or refined for their real personalities, but everyone is pretty much the same so far; guns, gaurd skills, catch phrases and all. On the other hand though, the story is a bit fast paced and I really don't understand why the queen would wait five years to get bodyguards instead of simply resolving the problem emidiatly after her daughters were attacked. |
meganimefreak 1/18/13 . chapter 3hmmmmmmmmm how about their mother disaproves of all the romance and sets up each sister to get married to another kingdom (i know typical) but here is the twist! their mother turns out to be evil wanting to rule all the land and willing to risk her 4 daughters for it. what she wasn't counting on was them ll being in love. obviously you can add way more to that but that is my idea for starters. i really like it! all my favorite couples! |
Guest 10/10/12 . chapter 3 How about kareoke? |
kenny445 9/4/12 . chapter 2Very interesting so far! Keep up with the good ideas |
Hello I'm AWESOME-and-WEIRD 8/28/12 . chapter 2So wait, let's get this straight... you ARE writing more, aren't you? CUZ I REALLY WANT YOOZ TO! Oh and awesomeness cuz NodaxYuri is mah favorite pairings! Plus the others, but still! |
OwlWhisper 8/24/12 . chapter 1This is sooo cute! I love the "KANADE SLICE THAT ROBOT!" That made me laugh so hard! Haha! I feel so awesome being the first one to review! XD Anyways, I love this story so far! Please update soon! |