Loved it! Too bad it ended here:)

Rereading again - LOVE this line! "No, I just did what I always do. You made it into a baby."

Love your writing, can't wait for more!

WRONG! She wasn't ready she didn't plan it. She had an IUD! She wasn't happy. You couldn't be more wrong! You tell peeps you know the characters so well. You don't know them in the least. You couldn't be more wrong about the way Charlotte thinks! You have no clue about Charlotte King or Cooper or his parents. You get it wrong every time. :P

You need to eat a few more twinkies to get your mojo for writing on.

From one fat gal to another this chapter was meh.

Another great chapter! Thanks so much for updating :)

i'm not such a fan of the name but it was an adorable chapter :)

Great chapter!

Watch your phrases. You repeat a lot throughout the story. Try to change things up a bit to make it more interesting. :)

A little contructive advice. We don't want to read every movement a character makes. You're excessively wordy to the point it kills the joy of reading your work. I often find myself skimming through your chapters to find actual dialogue to read. Another thing you portray Charlotte as very crass. Try to remember Charlotte is a professional. She's not a high school drop-out. Make her sound sophisticated instead of trashy. Hang in there. It takes time and patience but you'll catch on. :)

Really sweet :)

Update soon!

deslil He can sleep like a normal person!

Sweet!

While it was a bit on the short side, and I say that only because I enjoy your writing and always want more, it was a good chapter and I enjoyed the update.