|Reviews for A Girl Named Roxie|
| AnimeGirl 144 3/24/13 . chapter 4
I would say it was a daring move to kill Ben, but FusionFall already did that, so I guess it's not that daring XD
Hm... the Ruffs using Cheese to attack the Dexlab airship? They're not too smart for that, so I'm thinking they're working for someone.
Excellent chapter Prof.
| AnimeGirl 144 1/16/13 . chapter 3
An interesting chapter, and a nice way to pretty much breeze through the Academy.
I am curious on how Roxie knows Numbuh 2 though.
| AnimeGirl 144 10/12/12 . chapter 2
It's not bad, but I do suggest that you come back in another chapter and explain how the family knows the Utoniums (you know, aside from the standard: we live in the same neighborhood, thing). However, to make it more impactual (sp?), you should do it in a flashback sort of way; that way, you'll be showing rather then simply telling.
Overall, it was a nice read. I'm sure Zero will pick up on anything I missed.
| AnimeGirl 144 10/12/12 . chapter 1
The beginnings nice, but you may want to come back and clean up the lines. They're structed a bit weird for people to read.