|Reviews for Regret and Forgivness|
| Negative-Z 3/7/13 . chapter 1
Wow. What are the odds? Someone my niece's age has also written a Shuffle! fanfic AND is also a fav of Rev. Manson. I suppose I should feel old, but really I just feel hopeful. :) It's always encouraging to see someone take a risk at combining two things that wouldn't normally go together. I never got around to trying out the new MLP series, so I can't really judge your other fic, but this communicates how sincerely moved you were by both the song and this part of the Shuffle! story. I typically try to avoid fanfiction these days, but if you want a beta reader let me know.
| Mr.Kokomo 10/6/12 . chapter 1
Good start. It's emotional enough to capture what may have happened after Kaede's realization. Rin is especially good here, with his dreams being still used to Kaede's abuse. Though I will admit, the Marilyn Manson song is a bit out of place here, it's still a good one-shooter.