Well, it was a good story. Again, I hope there will be a sequel in which they face Darkseid, but it's all up to you. Thanks for the great story, and good-bye!

Aw, the Guardians are gone, and now Darkseid is plotting (gulp). I hope this opens the door for another story.

Hmm, a bit anti-climactic, and you got some words wrong: "cards in hand" should've been something along the lines of "monsters in my Graveyard". And how did Setsuka get Hermos? Oh well, onward!

Again, not as much LDs as I'd hoped...but then, you're being more realistic when it comes to Duels, plus you're being more open-minded instead of having the three wielders rely on them, so that's a point in your favor, actually.

Aw, no Critias. Oh well, at least Diana's gone. I know that sounds mean, but I'm a bit tired...though I know you are too, so I won't bitch about it. Anyway, bye!

Nice Duels so far. Looking forward to the continuation of the mother-daughter one.

Ooh, big stand-offs. Nice.

Okay, this is getting weirder. I can't say much else since I have a class soon, so bye!

Oh dear, quite an intense fight. I was kinda hoping to see Dreadscythe come out, but oh well.

Again,a nice cliffhanger, and nice training bit. Superman, for all his power, is without skill, something that he'll need a lot of in order to beat the upcoming opponents.

So the truth comes out. Spooky.

Spooky, and I'm a little surprised that Rebecca was beaten so easily, but not upset. I really hope Batman doesn't convince the others to give him their Legendary Dragons, and that the League realize that those "kids" are far from helpless. I have a class soon, so I'll have to end here. Bye!

Nice. So Kiryu is Hermos' wielder. The combination was pretty awesome too. Will Darkseid be making a reappearance soon? I'd ask more, but I have a class that starts in a few minutes, so I'll have to cut this short. Bye!

Great. You announce Hermos' advent, but we still don't know which guy is using him. He'd be great for both Decks, but it's all up to you. I look forward to finding out which is the Claw's wielder.

I apologize for the lateness of my review, but I had to move into my college dorm, get school supplies, text books, etc. Anyway, this was a good chapter, and RIP, Mackenzie. Oh well. It looks like Bommer/Greiger is about to awaken Hermos, and I wonder how he'll use it. Knowing you, it'll be kick-ass.