|Reviews for Grey Matters|
| bluephoenix65069 5/21/13 . chapter 27
Love it :)
| CosmicxLove15 5/21/13 . chapter 27
Whoops, just realized I posted that to chapter 1. Oh well, I'd comment on all 27 chapters if I had the energy. Frankly, I probably shouldn't b/c I'll just start rambling like a fangirl over your story. :) - CL
| CosmicxLove15 5/21/13 . chapter 1
First time reviewing but long time reader of this awesome story. I am obsessed with Cap and Evie and can't wait to see him kick butt to get her back. I love that Calvin kept face in front of Bad Frank and then high tailed it to tell Cap and the others that Ev was in danger.
Also glad that they don't have to hide anymore, especially since everyone is starting to find out about their secret. I just hope people are more accepting of it once they realize how much Cap loves her and what a good ally she's been through this whole ordeal.
When I read the part where she fiddled with the bracelet I got all sad thinking of Ellison. :(
Fantastic chapter, can't wait to read what's up next. I've been checking every day for updates. Also super excited that there is a H&M category. I bugged the site people about it the other day and they responded pretty quickly so that's exciting. :) - CL
| WhatsGoingOn 5/20/13 . chapter 27
Turned on by Cap, A TO THE MEN!
Omg precious Calvin bby, please don't get yourself killed, ily.
| soaringphoenix86 5/20/13 . chapter 27
OMG! Amazing chapter, start to finish. My heart goes out to Evie. All the thoughts and fears running through her head, unable to escape or warn anyone about the trap awaiting them, and then having to put up with the taunts and jeers of her captors. Hopefully, she can hang in there a little while longer. Help's on the way!
I'm glad that Evie and Calvin were able to come to a bit of an understanding. It makes me happy to know that even a McCoy can see though the lies of Perry Cline. Ugh, hate that guy! I didn't really care for Calvin during the series, but I gotta admit (the way you portray him) the man is definitely ballsy for riding up to a bunch of Hatfields unarmed and alone. Calvin's got a few more points in my book after reading this chapter...but Cap still wins hands down.
Speaking of...Hot damn! Part of the reason I always liked Will (besides his devilishly good looks ;) was for his quiet nature. He didn't need to be flashy like Johnse, and Cap just has the unspoken confidence about him that says he can get shit done. But I'd be lying if I didn't say that his fiercely protective/bad ass demeanor in this chapter doesn't have me swooning. Plus he finally FINALLY got to punch Johnse in the face and tell him exactly what he thought. Big bro got his butt handed to him by his little brother. Wonder how different things would have been if Will had been born first..
Now to business. Love that they are going to come up with a game plan while most of them have been drinking. Although, the real-life Cap Hatfield had to make a jail break of his own with a hatchet he had smuggled in, so who knows how creative these boys are going to get?! LOL loved Jim's sarcastic enthusiasm, and foreshadowing for that matter. Just this once, a Hatfield and McCoy are in agreement about something. At least some of the Hatfields know about the "secret" relationship. I just wonder how Anse is going to handle it after the recent fiasco with Johnse. Utterly thrilling and fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one! Let that creativity flow, and I'll see you there! Happy writing!
| nobois 5/20/13 . chapter 27
I am definitely anticipating the next chapter.
| KelseyBl 5/19/13 . chapter 27
Holy crap! Hate the waiting between chapters but that was totally worth it! Incredible chapter... Loved that you put Will's point of view in there and damn I need me a Will/Cap so bad! I really liked that you got Calvin to understand and help Evelyn. Please please update soon I will do whatever you ask! I NEED to know what happens next?! Your story is one of my absolute favorites! I check every day for an update... I am on my knees begging you to update soon please! :)
| TheForrestAgain 5/19/13 . chapter 27
*raises hand* anyway this was another brilliant chapter yay for a Cap to the rescue chappie!
| witchbaby300 5/19/13 . chapter 27
Um... I totally was! Just the way he put his family in their place and imagining him all fired up is hot. I laughed when Cap punched his brother because seriously he deserves it. I've wanted to do that the whole time I watched the show. I'm so excited that they finally know! And it only took 27 chapters. :-) I quality would update like you did before because it just made my day. Don't make us wait with this next chapter. If something happens to Cap or Evelyn I'm gonna scream bloody murder! Lol
| Scarlett Angelica Potter 5/19/13 . chapter 27
I love this story so much! :) please update ASAP! :D
| nobois 5/19/13 . chapter 26
UPDATE SOON! CAPITAL LETTERS ARE MORE EFFECTIVE THAN LOWER CASE!
| Thenandnow3434 5/9/13 . chapter 26
More please! I love Evie and Cap :)
| Alisabeth 5/7/13 . chapter 26
Oh wow! Poor Evelyn, I cant believe she's being arrested for this. I cant wait to read more :)
| soaringphoenix86 5/7/13 . chapter 26
...I blame Johnse, I really do. Him practically pleading with Evie to go look for Nancy once again has made things so much worse for the secret couple.
Poor Evie. First she's having PTSD-like nightmares after the death of Hunnam, then she is unable to save Fred Wolford's life, she learns her fiance is turning into a mini-Jim Vance, gets dragged into looking for a beaten Nancy, is once again subject to Randall McCoy's abusive hand, is accused and charged with playing a part in the McCoy boys' murders, and is now about to be used as bait to lure Will and his family across enemy/state lines. She is not having a good week at all. No doubt the McCoys will send word to make sure the news of Evie's arrest will spread like wildfire through Mate's Creek. I do not envy the person that has to tell Will what's happened to Evelyn. I just wish I could have slapped the smug expressions off of Nancy and Perry Cline, grrr!
I have a feeling the jig is going to be up with the Hatfields as well. Sure Evie and Cap have been friends in the family's eyes, but Will might have to come clean about their secret affair if he is going to convince them to help with her jail-break. My gosh, they are going to have to break her out of jail! That's a federal crime! What's worse is Wall and Devil Anse would be very aware of that too! Not to mention, everyone will know it's a trap. The McCoys must be really dense if they think the Hatfields won't be able to smell that from across the state line.
I really do almost wish for that happily ever after for Will and Evie, but at the same time the dramatic events churning with this feud in this fic have me hanging off your every word. Curse and bless you for your writing skills! Thanks for yet another exciting chapter! I'll be keeping an eye out for the next one! Until then, happy writing!
| KelseyBl 5/7/13 . chapter 26
Love it! Wish there was more will/evelyn in this chapter but I see the point of what you did put in. I am completely obsessed with this story, you even got me into watching sons of anarchy from your comments about it. Please update soon, my head is spinning ideas pf what will happen when will finds out and if Evelyn will find a way to send a message... Please update soon and put me out of my misery!