Ooh! This just got a whole lot more interesting! Hmm...so is the red-vil supposed to be one of Bowser's relatives? Hmm I did hear a theory that Wart was Bowser's brother, but maybe it's one of the koopalings? Ahh! I dunno ; p but I really like this :)

I like the red hair explanation and Peach's new outfit, also you write action scenes very well. Good job :)

I wonder what the deal with that goomba enforcer is...hmmm...does Bowser even know Peach is missing? Lol

I really like where this is going, Peach is my favorite Mario character :) there are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but they are all minor and I feel are just unintentional mistakes on your part, since it looks like you can spell :p I'd just say to be a little more careful on future chapters and maybe proofread one extra time before posting. Anyways I will most definitely be following this! :3

You bettr make some chapters.

Nicely done.

Sorry, I'll write a signed review once my account is working again. XD Anyways! Why does this story have so few reviews?! Seriously, your writing style is wonderful! I just love how you write Peach. I know I mentioned that before, but you write her perfectly! I really can't wait to read more! :D

Wow, this is a really good story! I love how you made Mario quiet just like he normally is and the whole start of Peach's dilema was so well written! I can't wait to read more!