You've mixed Talia al Ghul and Kate Beckett into a fantastic persona. It still feels like she is 100% Beckett, but we can see the traits she would have picked up from Ra's blended in subtly. In other words; perfectly done! Can't wait to see Castle and Co. thrown into the mix!

Interesting idea for sure.

I really enjoy this. I like what you have planned for the next story can't wait to read more!

I look forward to reading the sequal.