Correction - 27 was rather unexpected. Talk about a plot-twist.

Different ending then expected. But nicely well done. Shame that Tron never was able to get back home.

*clutches heart* These past two chapters...author I believe you are trying to break my heart. This story is so wonderfully written, but damn it is heart-wrenching.

Oh my God. Is this the end? Since this is is labeled a tragedy. Tron' s going to commit suicide by hanging himself, isn't he? Please tell me it doesn't end here.

Excuse me while I go sob in a corner.

screw plot bust down the arcade door and go home tron give it a good kick show the whole world!

Just...wow. Here's hoping it's a nightmare Tron can wake up from. O_O

Wow, poor Tron! And where's Flynn? Trapped on the Grid? This chapter has me hooked, and I cannot wait to read more. Easily a :D rating for awesomeness.

Interesting fortune reading. Glad to see both Alan and Flynn agreed they haven't been fair to Tron during this whole ordeal. No wonder why the guy's sporting gray.

These chapters have been so interesting so far, and they never fail to keep me captivated. I really can't wait for the next chapter, especially if Tron finally returns to the Grid. Seriously, well done :D

Cue plot-twist. I can almost see it coming.

Love the symbolism found within the latter portion of ch. 23 with how much alike the situation of Tron and the bottled-up butterfly really is. Can't understand why those supposedly his friends won't acknowledge they're killing Tron by forcing him to stay.

Although I am curious about the legality of Tom Bradley's existence, or actual lack thereof. He would possess none of the official I.D. or any other important papers. Not even a Social Security number or a birth certificate to "prove" he's an American citizen. (I'm sure Tron would love to be "deported" back to his true home if the authorities went that far...but whta would then become of the Grid?)

Can't wait to read the rest.

Now I'm really starting to get worried for Tron. Another -year- passes by? Isn't this all killing him bit by bit (no pun intended. Ok, maybe pun was intended). Gotta wonder what Flynn is playing at. And whether or nor Alan actually would help Tron fulfil his wish if it meant they may not see one another again.

In the earlier portion of the story Tron did overhear his User didn't even expect him to be a sentient, living being. Since Alan was first caught up in a dream world of having the program as a son...will be hard for them both when reality kicks in.

Not much to say about this chapter (I'm getting in that mood where I feel as though I don't leave thought provoking reviews and thus am not fit to say anything).

My only reactions were: Tron-Tom has an admirer. But is she more interested in his connection to Flynn? Also, look like we'll never see Tron return to the Grid. He's going to miss the whole coup, should it happen. I genuinely thought Flynn would have his mysterious disappearance in this chapter. Not that I'm miss it, but I really was expecting him to vanish after saying he'd take Tron back.

But the ending...Tron/Yori feels all over.

Came in late. Enjoying reading your work though. Have to feel for Tron though. Dealing with gridbugs must be way easier than human.

Doesn't surprise me Flynn's hesitant on taking Tron back to the Grid. Ironic since when when the Program was first invited on the -vacation- Flynn didn't expect he would really be staying. Can't help but wonder just why Flynn's stalling.

I completely forgot to review this chapter. I read it when it came out, but I was on my Ipod at the time and never got around to it.

So...I see "Tom" isn't entirely traumatized by his ordeal with Jordan. He is paranoid now, but not insane. I guess. It's cool to see that he got over his disgust of Sam. And I like how he replaced Jordan as the housewife role after she died. I can't imagine your interpretation of Tron in the User world would be good at anything close to a real job. Not in his condition.

His request to go home was a bit of a shock. I thought he would never want to return. And Flynn's denial in turn DIDN'T surprise me. He tends to make huge and disastrous mistakes, so I wouldn't be surprised if he ruins everything again by refuse to take Tron back to the Grid when he asked.

Things are slowing down a a bit. What will happen next?

...Flynn's disappearance?