Sexual tension crackled in this. Love it :)

Ah-doooo-ra-ble!

Amazing and really sexy and cute!

aaahahaha so cute :) Loved it! Very clever idea and very well written!

Oh wow! I love the tension you built here and the insights into Mel's and Joe's thoughts! Nice work! :)

Do you know that sometimes I wonder whether something happened in the show and find out that you wrote that moment? Yes! That is how good you are!

And this is Christmas early! You juste wrote two new fics! Yay!

Loves this story. Too bad more people aren't reading this. But its really good

Oh I wish that wasn't all. I love it. You write so well. Plz consider writing another :)

That was such a great snap-shot of their crazy life. I hope you keep writing about them.

It's always a pleasure to see a Mel/Joe story from you, so I'm glad you got inspired to write more fic before the finale. (Although now I cannot WAIT to see how you respond to the triangle; I take it as a promise that you will).

I think my favourite part was the eclair fight. How did Joe manage to take his shirt off without Mel commenting? Lennox's reaction was priceless.

This was a great feel-good story. Thanks for sharing!

Simply amazing! Your characterizations & dialogue were spot on. The 'eclair fight' I can see happening between Joe & Mel. Gawd, I wish they would really pick up the pace with this whole 'they have chemistry and are dying to be together' trope already and really make it happen. Fanfiction writers can do it, the staff writers can do it! Once again, lovely story.