Still have another chapter or so to go but I just had to put this in here...

I nearly died when I read it...

"I need an adult." xD

All I could hear in my head is "I am an adult!" from Celes

My neighbor knocked on my wall for being so loud with the laughing . loved it, I love that line...poor Trunks/Mini Veggie...well...not really poor him, but still .

Hi! i do sincerely hope you will be able to update a chapter for this story soon :)

O.O...

Awesome

Poor usagi, reiko, rei, ami, makoto, and mina! they may have to fight or defend part of their birth right! :( it's sad becasue it's not every body on althean who is a bad seed. its a shame when others have to suffer for the actions of a few, but history is full of this!

but your fic is great and I can't wait till the next chappie :D I also love the characters development and their relationship with each other its so cute!

will usagi and vegeta have more children? isn't reiko and paragus kind of old to be having kids? it's kind of weird their children are the same age as their grandchildren or their grand child is older then there offspring in bardocks case! :P
sorry its a pet-peeve of mine along with a mother having children who are 10 or 20 years apart in age :P the first child could be like another parent to the other child.

Ha Ha Ha not funny! If you had ended the fic like that I would have disown you and taken away your title! ;P

Uh oh. This is gonna be good if the Saiyans go to war. It was so funny that Vegeta hadn't realized. Hahaha and telling him in a quiet place was great. You rock!

I think I'm going to cry woman. That's all there is to the end of this chapter. I'm going to curl in a ball and cry.

Its like Game of Thrones up in this fanfic! Hee, Trunks love all the hoes like his uncle Raditz! Speaking of Raditz my heart melted when Gohan hugged him! So precious! Babies were precious too! King Vegeta must be stuck babysitting constantly, not that he minds. Roflmao

MEGAN! I WUV YOU TOO BISH!

Imagine my surprise the seeing this updated. I kow you've had the squirrel moments. I like what you did with the one scene, totally made it your own. I'm more than happy to help channel Mina for you. :P

I've enjoyed this chapter as a whole as it does cement and bring out a whole bit of awesomeness of our particular group of saiyans and those they care for.

But yes, like Usagi I would be worried. Sounds like there shall be blood...but how much will be taken and will a compromise be sought?

One never knows considering the hate amongst both different groups besides the mated pairs.

-huggles the fic close- So awesome-sauce...and it's better than apple. :P

I hope there is not a limit because I am curious to see where things go from here! Great chapter by the way! Lol. I hope for Usagi's sake it does not mean war for her people she has a lot of people still she would lose. I look forward to the next chapter!

I dont think there is a limit to chapters in stories on this site i read a story here that 0had 17o chapters in it and they were about as long or longer than these chapters. keep going i like the stile of the writing you use and this story is so interesting

Hi... so this is the very first time that I have ever reviewed a story, and I have been on this site for years though I have not posted anything. So here I'll start... I love this story! I have been hooked on it from the beginning. It is a great story and I would love to read more. I do hope that it was a joke of sorts when you posted "And then they all died in the massive explosion! The End!".

I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!

Yours,

Vanyel-Luver aka Amanda

Do you have ANY! Idea how much I love this! This past month has been good for me because I've gotten the chance to use other peoples computers lol... I bought a computer! however I don't have the money for the moniter, yet lol I'm working on it. Not easy when I'm broke. I get a new phone next week! I kinda broke mine... but it's okay because it was a crappy boost phone, I needed to upgrade anyway. Throwing it at the wall after a fight with my ex was just what I needed to push me to buy a new one.

ANYWAY! THIS STORY IS FLIPPING AMAZING! I came on expecting both your stories to be updated as I saw it was in the gw/sm but I wanted to read this one ever since you told me about. I sat here for 7 hours STRAIGHT! Probably longer, my sister kept nagging at me to get off lol... it's her pc but I'm only visiting her for a short while anyway so I told her to shove it.

God I am so in love with this! And you have so many friggin stories now too! I dunno where I'm gonna get the time to read them all 0.0! This one took me as long as it takes me to work a shift haha! God that makes me so happy! It'll probably be awhile before I come on again unles I can get that moniter then I'll be on as often as I can.

Don't mind the bad grammar, I'm drinking a beer and drowning in my sorrows lol god this was amazing. Next time I'm on i'll read your GW/SM and then all the other delicious SM/DBZ and can I just say, the mature tone of your stories is extremely refreshing. I realize now that I'm older, these stories are just better XD keep them diiiirty girl lol when I get the new phone I'll go to the library and email you my phone number. It'll probably be the same one cause I was able to (shoch shock) talk boost into taking pity on my poor self cause I haven't paid the bill in almost 2 months, so they won't give my num away but we'll see when I activate my new phone c:

Thank you for this. God this is so friggin amazing. It reminds me of a more mature version of the good old stories from the good old days. I'll shut up now I know there are so many errors but I'm too inebriated to correct them lol KEEP IT UP!

I hope they really didn't die from a massive explossion tho, I'm gonna pretend they didn't lol

That be so sad if you left it that, but I know you didn't! I really enjoyed this chapter especially the part with Trunks with all the girls. I still can not believe that Vegeta does not know yet. Lol. Looking forward to the nect chapter! Hope it comes out soon,

Hahaha I was reading this on my tablet reader, and it wasn't bolded at the end, I said what the hell! Lol very nice. Can't wait for more. Lol I feel sorry for poor Trunks. I'm kinda surprise these women aren't mated with such skills. Lol crazy hormones. ;)