He-hey! I finally caught up! :D To see Sahari coming on the trip is awesome! I'd be excited if I was her. I know she'd never turn down a challenge and I love the way you write her! I wonder if she'll be attending Midsummer Valentine's.
I love the history behind Jarabe! It makes a lot of sense and is pretty interesting. Another interesting thing is how they get seafood all the way out there and keep it fresh. How do you do that?!
Jeez, how many people know about Ameena's feelings for Patch? Everyone but the man himself? XD It's funny that way.
Gretchen has stun guns? Is that for the Dragonache or the Barkbark and Sarsgorilla men? XD
I wonder, will they actually find the Dragonache? And if they do, who keeps it? Will they even tame it? So many questions! Your fic is amazing! Update as soon as you can, I'll be watching for more! ;D

Aww! I'm so happy for Leafos! I was half freaking out Jardy would have a rage for touching his wife's old possessions. I love how he lets Leafos wear it and on top of that Jardiniero showed actual interest in her! Shows his fatherly side through his ego. I'm so happy!
Maybe Jardiniero might approve of Hafez if he stays in this mood. Ooh! Fingers crossed!

Well that trip into the Dessert Desert certainly got flipped around! I had no idea it would turn into a Dragonache hunt of all things! I wonder if the source of the sighting is even reliable. And so close to Midsummer Valentine's too! Oh dear, bit of pressure there. I hope Ameena doesn't have to leave the hunt early because of it. Oh, I really wanna see if she makes it in time! Must read on!

Oh my gosh! XD Little Babochka and Atsou? That was hilarious! I love how you show Babochka's mindset and how she really thinks they are royalty and stuff. If she ever grows out of that phase and looks back, she'll probably be really embarrassed! :P
Babochka was so cute when talking to Atsou, thinking he was a prince and stuttering. It's so cute! 8) Her will for him to stay was adorable too!
I understand that Atsou just wanted to pass the time but he should never mess with a young girl's feelings. I felt terrible when Bab started to cry! XD Good thing she recovered. I feel it's about time someone actually spoke about reality to her so Atsou saying he was really a tourist made me smile. I think Bab's reaction was spot on! Her clinging to the fantasy is definitely what I'd do.
Ahh, I love the way you write your characters! :D Atsou is such an interesting character; I really don't see many like him! I almost don't want to stop to review, I wanna read more so bad. Almost. ;)

Again, I LOVE your interpretation of how the island's history! You go into such depth about everything, I'm surprised the Gods didn't exist in the game! I love love LOVE it!
Ahhh, now I see how Midsummer Valentine's is so important to Leafos! I think her idea might actually work! I sure hope it'll win Jardiniero over though. You can never tell with that man!
I love how you've given Babochka's family a place in the village rather than her being some wandering random girl. Just shows how well thought out your ficverse is!
Ooh Patch and Ameena? How cute! I think they'd be quite good together. It'd be awesome if Patch, Hafez, Atsou, Ameena, Leafos and Petula all got into the finals! You never know though! ;)

Whoa. WHOA. Hafez actually went to Dastardos' tree?! That's a death wish I can't believe he actually survived! I know Das' anger starts off really quiet and when he yells, you're probably deadmeat. I can't believe it actually got to that stage!
Unfortunately, I agree that not much can be done for Dastardos. Poor guy. Hafez is probably better off with the knowledge he tried. If he ever tells Leafos and she come to Das... Hafez is SO dead! He'll know who told.
Yay! Magnar was there! I love that little guy. I'm glad he's in your ficverse and that he's smart enough not to leave the tree, lest he reveal Das for who he really is!
I'll read more later. So excited!

Talk about unlikely friendship! I never thought these two would be friends! I love it! It cracked me up when Atsou tried to come up with an excuse to keep their friendship a secret and said he wouldn't make fun of him anymore. Seedos' reactions were priceless!
I agree with Seedos on rapping. It does sound like someone is just speaking the lyrics of the song and to an Islander, he may struggle to see how it's music. Nice work on his perception of it!
The moment where Seedos lied about the graveyard was hilarious. I have a fear of zombies (I think it's dying down but I may have just jinxed it... *knocks on wood*) so I can see where Atsou is coming from and feel his fear but Seedos was right to scare him. I'm surprised Seedos actually lied like that. I guess tense situations like that make you do things you wouldn't normally. Congratz Seedos!
I was wondering when Atsou was going to ask about gem trees. Seedos is a professional at this kind of thing so it's to be expected he knows where they are since he hands out the seeds. This might end well for Atsou and maybe he can win Petula over with the money he earns from it or something! Atsou is going to be a Cassanova again since the first time was part one so maybe that's what'll happen. I don't really know but I'm eager to find out!

He-hey! Hafez finally caught on! Congratz, you finally figured out what nobody has! :D I wonder what he'll do with that information. If he tells Leafos, she might think he went crazy or something, I dunno. I'm really eager to see exactly what it is he does now!
Poor Leafos. It's good for her to vent exactly how things happened. She's so brave to push through her traumatic tale! I love your take on how things happened when the Ruffians attacked. I'm not surprised Storkos had a crush on a Watchling though. He was probably her rolemodel and helped her become a superhero. How cute

Oooh! I like how this is going! I had no idea Hafez had such a background! It's nice to get such an insight like that. I had no idea they ate on the floor! I'm a little sad his family doesn't like the masks and the lifestyle as much as they did in Afghanistan but it's so lovely to see how Hafez pushes through that and loves Leafos anyway! They seem so certain they will get married though. I hope everything turns out as they envision but you never know. :/
I can totally empathise with that awkward silence when you run out of things to say. So uncomfortable! . I am not very strong socially so I tend to come across that situation about once every two weeks. :P
I really want to know what this next conversation is about! It seems so important! Hopefully it's good but the secrecy is getting to me. Must read on!

This. Was. Fantastic!

I always love seeing other Villages in VP stories, and this Dessert Desert one didn't disappoint! That tavern sounds WONDEFUL, I'd really really love to go there! I like the way the barkeep sounds too! Haaaaandsome! :D Gretchen teasing Ameena about Patch was really funny and adorable ,too! I think it's hysterical how everyone knows Ameena likes Patch except for Patch himself!

And YESSSS, Sahari! I absolutely LOVE how you write her character! You do a fantastic job! I'm SO glad she's coming with them on the Dragonache hunt! I can't wait to see what happens! Keep up the fab work!

Awesome! This chapter was interesting and gave me some insight to the Gods. Mze is funny but I do feel sorry for Cueraça. He's dying. ): Hopefully he won't die; even if he was the old God of Death, it'd be sad. And I only just met him and I'm attached! Mainly because I can sympathise with him. Mze should have come to the battle when they needed him! I wonder if they will open the portals again. That could stir some things up! Read on!

Hahaha! Cassanova is right! Wow, I am with Petula on this. He seems a tad too young for her but you never if she may change her mind or not. They do seem to have a lot in common so Atsou's got that going for him. I notice it's part one. Atsou will strike again! Hahaha! On Midsummer Valentine's Day, perhaps? You seemed to nail Petula's character, by the way. The acknowledgement of their similar personalities, the use of "like" is just right and her vainty are all great! The line "I must say that I like me too" made me crack up because that is SO Petula! Looking forward to more!

Nice! I really like this chapter! It took me a bit to wrap my head around the concept of Gods and new locations, forming a map in my mind and stuff. But once the pieces came together I was astounded! I know I've said this before but I LOVE your take on VP. It's so original! I really want to read more about the Gods now. Das being the God of Death totally suits him! I love the research you did and the depth of your knowledge, giving Pinata Island a more specific location and knowing lots of info about Ghana. To be honest, I had to google Ghana and that fit all the info together much better.
I agree that while Atsou is cocky, he is adorable too. I think he should be called Atsou da Boss, hahah! So Ameena and Atsou are descendants from Gods. Epic! I can't wait to see if either of them actually DO get powers!

OMG! I just had an AWESOME IDEA! What if Ameeena got to meet Patch's family? That would be AWESOME!

...Might be kinda cute too. XD

Someone should make a picture of Leafos with the mask and Gown, and make a link so we can all see it. In fact, someone should make pics of ALL the characters! I'm horrible at drawing, so I'm just suggesting. Yay?