cant wait for chapter 31. its great , like reading a script of a sgu episode. keep up the great work.

HEHEHEHEHE I can see betrayal looming

Awesome

I have to admit I was quite affraid when I read fairy the first time you introduced it, but you did just fine about it so far. Please continue doing good job :)

Awesome

awesome

interesting

well i liked the story till you started adding elves goblin etc! goblins? really?

A creature/being that is similar to a fairy, interesting.

Free us. We are aware. We might, some of us, I am going insane ,if we are locked in stasis any longer. We are awake in the mind, Eli! Tamara, shes only going to get worse faster if shes in the same state as I. The Colonel, will never recover. Save us soon. Eli, youve got to recheckyk th. Help. Us.

Dream log nick rush, Writ, this day, of another endless day.

I hope there will be more

I like where you're going. I always wondered why more civilizations didn't just bury their gates like Earth did.

And now you're talking about building a giant ZPM, when you said the solution was to exit ftl inside a star..? This story is starting to make even less sense.

Er.. Do you just forget the stuff you write previously? First you say that the diagnostics on the pod show that all the hardware was running, so it was just a software problem. Then you have all those scenes that show Eli taking parts from other consoles to replace the broken and damaged ones in the pod (that previously you said were in perfect condition)? Also what was with "Maths wasn't his forte"? I suppose he was called mathboy for no reason.

Well clearly Eli is just retarded.. Wasting power AND time when he needs to be repairing the stasis pod. He's only got two weeks after all and hasn't even started. If he keeps exploring the ship won't even make it to the next galaxy and everyone will die.