I love Rumbelle and I love this story!

This was different, but I enjoyed it. However, I'm would have been curious to hear how Belle reacts when she realizing the truth about her child. She's not the type of person who would be ignorant forever.

What the FUCK! She was raped! But I liked your solution to the problem. Very ... romantic.

Really fab - well written and a tale that kept us on our toes!

i really liked this,you should write a continuing story based off this one!

I agree that this story should continue in Storybrooke.

very cool! will there be more? Belle might be horroifed though at how it will inacted

Wonderful, and very powerful. I'm so glad that Belle thinks the baby is his, she deserves at the very least that much peace of mind. Thanks for posting!

Oh wow! What a powerful story! Bravo!

Belle rocks. Rumbelle rocks. and Rumple rocks.

This story is very original and fresh and it's so well written. I really enjoyed reading this first chapter. Loved the way you portrayed Belle and Rumple and you made me feel a lot of things at once. Please continue with this! And thanks for sharing it with us! I love it!

My gods, woman, the FEELS. Incredibly powerful, with some new ideas I haven't encountered before: that 'forever' meant she wouldn't age. That he could hold onto the curse with effort whilst kissing her. I never tumbled to Belle withdrawing after their night together because she thought he didn't love her due to his not changing. Her telling him the baby news and his reception of it was pitch perfect. Did he make the right decision? I think so. If you were Belle, would you want that horrific knowledge? I'd rather be blissfully ignorant.

I am begging you, on hands and knees, keep going with this story! It is so ripe with ways to take the current story and add a twist with the baby. Or even a whole new story with baby Belle. Oh please think about it, I'd love to read more!

Interesting, I like her incentive :)

This is great! Keep working it!