| Reviews for The Things We Keep or Give Away |
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Mohair 6/5/13 . chapter 12Great story. Can't wait for more. |
Guest 5/16/13 . chapter 12 Really enjoy reading this story! Well written, and keeps me wanting more. |
Ciara 5/16/13 . chapter 12 Not mad just glad that you are still writing more chapters even though we're waiting a little longer to read them. As long as you plan to continue I'll happily read whatever you post. Nice chapter btw! |
rlrct 5/15/13 . chapter 12Nice story so far! I hope life gets out of the way and lets you keep updating it. |
flaunt 5/15/13 . chapter 12Nice sweet chapter. Really cool that Harm remembers the stories tied in to dresses, when most guys can't even remember anything about what a woman wore the day before. As for the chaos and madness of everyday life - glad you're seeing light at the end of the tunnel. I personally find that the best way to get through the day to day is to carry a little light (allegorically speaking of course) with you so even if you are nowhere close to the end of the tunnel, the dark isn't always quite so dark. If that light (positivity) comes from writing fic or something else creative - then as long as you can do even a little bit of that everyday, sometimes I feel that the rest of life doesn't get you down so much. Can't wait to read the next chapter, and I'm hoping this is a long story with many many chapters to come as well. |
jpstar57 5/15/13 . chapter 12Very nice continuation. Loved how they got caught telling stories. You could really feel the love Harm has for Mac as he told the stories. Can't wait to see more of this really nice story. |
bethsthings 5/15/13 . chapter 12Wonderful to see an update. Great story. Hope life calms down a little so you can continue with this amazing story. |
alix33 5/15/13 . chapter 12"Have you decided what you're going to put in their first?" - "put in there". I have always thought the dress from the NATO ball is just a bit prettier than the one from the Sudanese embassy. Not that the Sudanese embassy one is ugly either. "You know all the stories, huh?" "The way you looked in some of those dresses, Mac… I could never forget any second." She smiles back at him and leans in for a kiss before the two go their separate ways until the evening." - AW! |
colee41 5/15/13 . chapter 12Thanks fr updating! I like the bittersweet moment Kate felt entering her mother's room. I also like how Harm and Kate were caught by Mac! Update soon! |
ad694 5/14/13 . chapter 12I love this story. Looking forward to more when you can. |
ad694 5/9/13 . chapter 11This is a great story! I just read it for the second time. Patiently awaiting more. |
Juliette101 4/12/13 . chapter 11i like this fic too :) |
Michi uk 2/26/13 . chapter 11It didn't take Kate long to finish painting her room much to Harms surprise. It won't be long before before the whole house will be ready Can't wait. |
ArmyDT42 2/25/13 . chapter 11Another outstanding chapter! Really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work. |
steamboat 2/25/13 . chapter 11 sweet. keep up the good work! I agree with your idea on the Mattie storyline. It's hard to believe that Harm and Mattie could have bonded in less than a week. |