Wow. Good story you have here.

This was a good story. It was full of depth and I really loved it. I'm glad that you were able to craft such a nice crossover, and I find the two epilogues very nice.

You know, when I first started reading this story 12 hours ago, I thought it was going to be another lame crossover romance that wouldn't even work out write. Suffice to say, I was surprised man. This has got to be the best Shinji/Shinobu/Rei fanfic I have ever read. EVER. The plot was engaging, the characters believable and intriguing, and the ending(s) was spectacular. I laughed, I cried, I seriously thought about bashing my head into the keyboard a few times, but throughout it all I could only think one thing: "AWESOME". Good job to you Zentrodie. You definitely deserve it.

very good except for one major thing... KEITARO AND NARU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER! ( please excuse me for shouting. ) If your going by the manga, Naru is the girl Keitaro made his promise to go to Tokyo U with. They are madly in love with each other and I doubt from the bottom of my heart that they would EVER break-up. ( Again, please excuse my use of capitals.) OK, now that I've let all of that out, excellent story as I have stated before. Second Epilogue was... interesting. Don't mind the Shinji-Shinobu-Rei triangle, but Keitaro and Naru are the ones supposed to be together, plus, I sincerely doubt that Asuka could go for Keitaro.

Shinobou ,eh? Considering thier personaI would say it is a good match? only on chapter 2 thus far, but will finish the rest of it. By the way you should check out "Love Shinji" if you haven't.

great story thankyou

Well written. Had to be, cause the only time I stopped reading was when I could not keep my eyes open.

Not sure which ending I liked most, liked both of them a lot.

Thanks for the good read.



May the MUSE be with you!

I must say, once more, that this is probably one of the finest Eva fics I've ever read. And I've read a number. I love it. Pure and simple. I've read it page to page and chapter to chapter six times. And I was there when it was still being written.

A late review? Possibly. But I think it still has it's kick. My hat's off to you. Fine work and I look forward to the updates to your current fics. You're a testament to the finest of the fan fic community. Cheers.

Beautiful... Simply beautiful. I have never seen a better story yet.

Well done. I finaly finished and I loved it! The ending one was wierd since I don't think she would be that... slow. Ending 2 was wierd since only 1 other fan fic (for eva) had the 3 person marage done right.

Well this may sound evil but I'm sad it is a dream there. Darn!

YEY! I'm liking this so far. Full review soon but YEY NO -!(For Shinjis girlfriend)

I really like the story so far. Only thing that puts me down a bit are the grammar mistakes that you seem to make quite often that might scare others from enjoying it, such as:

too/to
possesive/plural words (Shinji's/possesive Shinjis/plural Shinjis)

Would be nice if you used a dash instead of a period when doing stutters and s-such. I know it's small stuff but that's what breaks the type of mood you may be trying to set up. Otherwise you're doing a great job with the general story.

This is the first serious cross over fic that I have liked. Ever. Normally cross overs feel really forced out but you crafted the world so well together that it actually feels like it fits. I also liked how you portrayed the relationship between Shinobu and Shinji and how you had all your characters evolve subtly as the story went on. Either way very entertaining and well written! The *only* fault I can find is just a few typos but really that doesn't matter too much in the end.

Loved it and I hope to see s'more stories from you!

This was a great story and a well done crossover.