I just finished reading both of your stories and they're great. Some of the Mythology is off (like Hel is actually Loki's daughter. Sorry had to point that out.) but really great. Looking forward for the next story.

Hey, I just finished reading both of your stories in this series, I just wanted to say that you have a really nice writing style, keep up the good work. I really like your ideas for this story... so please don't discontinue it. :)

When I saw the word Alfheim I immediatly thought of ducks. Go figure.

Only problem; I can imagine Loki pronounces 'Llewelyn' horribly. (sorryyyyy it's just in my head)

AHHHHHHH! THE FEELS! I hope you will be quick in giving us the next story. This has to be, hands down, THE best fanfiction I have read since June. UPDATE QUICKLY!

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sorta
Love it love it love it!
I winder what will happen next?
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NICO! HELP THEM!

good chapter update

UPDATE PLSSSSSSSS

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ps. I love the welshy-ness of the Llewelyn bit and I love the fact that she's british! You'd think one of the Asgardians would have picked up on that by now?

Forever loving your writing
x-ema-x

xoxox

this is great! continue!

They should all use their powers and go all kick butt! And everyone else should be like: whoa. What just happend.

I LOVE THIS
I've read the first one as well but i thought i may as well just put it into this one review.
(funnily enough i only just watched Thor yesterday...:)))
ummm what kinda of time is it in asgard?(is it before or after the film/ avengers?)
I seriously wantPercy to swordfight with thor (please), Thalia to show the lightning stuff, and stuff...

I kanda want to see their reactions to all their powers..
...Please?

nice!

:)