do another chapter

Hmm..Interesting...

Wow. Just... wow.

well interesting chapter, well looks like the crooks weren't the most inteligent ones, nice whit the misterious figure there

I have two suggestions for you:
1. Clean up your spelling and grammar. Between the moments where the mystery dragon swooped down at the car and the robbers were left in their underwear, I wasn't sure what had happened.
2. Do away with the "we go to..." moments. Be a bit more descriptive.

Other than those two things, your story is fine. You have managed to build up mystery about who this dragon is. So, keep going.

i like it but can u make it longer? also try to put a inviteing plot.