|Reviews for American Dragon Jake Long: A New Season EP1|
| DestinyRoseLongBieber 3/26/13 . chapter 1
do another chapter
| RoseQuartz1 10/13/12 . chapter 1
| sonicissocool112 8/13/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Just... wow.
| Major Simi 8/12/12 . chapter 1
well interesting chapter, well looks like the crooks weren't the most inteligent ones, nice whit the misterious figure there
| Fudogg 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I have two suggestions for you:
1. Clean up your spelling and grammar. Between the moments where the mystery dragon swooped down at the car and the robbers were left in their underwear, I wasn't sure what had happened.
2. Do away with the "we go to..." moments. Be a bit more descriptive.
Other than those two things, your story is fine. You have managed to build up mystery about who this dragon is. So, keep going.
| mjr1107 8/11/12 . chapter 1
i like it but can u make it longer? also try to put a inviteing plot.