Perfect ending and perfect beginning. Yes - Book 5 - The Wedding!

Wow - love, romance, action, drama, justice served, and a happy ending. Well done.

i like the way you added Nurse Hawthorne into this story! i was also a fan of that show i REALLY wish they would bring it back *sigh*

i love this story! and YES i defenitly think you should start on book 5

Great job!

If they were awerd to be won for best fanfiction you won hand down. In my book. :) until I read again.

Oh gosh. Daddy Reese is something to behold. I know we'll never see it on the show so this is beyond so much fun to read!

I so loved how you had him take out Elias. I was expecting a long spiel before he took him out but he was like, "Nope, I don't have time for this. I gotta get back to my family." And Elias didn't even know what hit him.

Only Reese could kill a boatload of people (that kill at the beginning was chilling!) and then go home to cradle his newborn daughter like nothing happened. LOL

Vivian sure chose the worst time to make her debut, didn't she? I can't imagine...

Absolutely loved the previous chapters where Reese was trying to keep Carter home and safe. Wouldn't expect anything less from him. And it's probably best that Finch and Carter keep that secret between them. Even I don't want to know how John would react if he knew! LOL

Excellent series. I've read them all and have so enjoyed the progression. Though I do wonder what Carter has had to tell her co-workers, friends, and fam about who got her pregnant! They gotta be wondering, right? LOL

Great ending! Thanks for an awesome read!

Yeah! That story just makes me want to do a celebatory fist pump. Brilliant work. Jos giving birth while in the middle of a gun fight. Now that is pretty bad ass.

and what do mean 'should I start on book 5?'. Well duh, of course. Bit of a stupid question right there

Yes start on Book 5

John made his mind up, elias had to die. John got all the intel he needed. He carefully planned his strike and carried it out with expert percision. Good to read that joss, taylor, and baby vivian are all doing well. And uncle finch is taking care of them. I'm so happy for john, he has a family, new baby. What he never thought he would have. I would love to read other numbered poi book stories. You did such a fantastic with this story.

Pari, you did it again! I love your writing style. So glad they included Finch in their family. John was so bad ass when he was taking care of Elias' henchman. Wished you were writing for the actual show. And to answer your question, yes, you should start on Book 5.

I loved John as dad! Definitely looking for a book V. This was a truly amazing story. Thank you!

This was so awesome! Thank you for this lovely story. We can only dream this is how things would happen on the show, but it is nice to read stories with a happy ending for our heroes. For all their sacrifices, they certainly deserve a happy ending. : ) Please start book 5, ASAP! LOL! ?

AWESOME! FANTASTIC! AMAZING! Definitely worth the wait! I'm in love with Baby Vivian ;-) Please post Book 5!