Nice chapter. I loved the part where Noah said that he hated Zelda. That was funny. ;)

One of the best stories I have read in a long, long time. I would count this among my favorite works amongst the worlds of Shannara and Middle Earth. :) Congratulations, you have earned nothing but praise from me, no small feat. I would not be surprised to ever see your works on bookshelves, should you ever pursue such a line of work.

Last two lines...STAR WARS! xD Had to say that. lol

And so the cycle returns again. XD I absolutely loved this! But, what happened to the part in the book where it said that Dark Link would return over and over to be defeated by Link? I can see Dark in Noah, but his powers seem muted a bit. X( Oh well, like I said, I really loved this! Thank you for this story!

:D

A great ending to a great story! I'm kinda gonna miss it though.

How ironic (though you probably planned it that way) that the ones to end the story are Link and Zelda. But really, when you get to the twelfth one, I think it might be time to stop using that name for a while. -

And Faroe is back with a Link, yay!

"Oh yeah? You and what army?"
Thirty people step out of the shadows.
"This one."
(That was funny.)

Well, it's over. Darn, seems like all the stories I like are ending at the same time...

At any rate!

Hm. I actually have a bit of concrit this time. Just a little, though. On the ending line, perhaps you could switch the dialogue and the...other...thingy? XD Maybe it would have a more interesting effect, but that's just me. XD

Anyways, what a nice way to wrap things up. You give us throwbacks to everyone, and it's just argh, amazingly well crafted.

This whole story was simply amazing. I feel like I've been with it a long time, even though you were almost halfway done when I started reviewing. To make a story out of such a humble concept...well done. I look forward to what you do next.

...What is this. D:

No, no, that's not what I meant. It's an excellent, chapter, just-excuse my reader fury-why?! Why do they have to go? D: That's horrible, Storyteller! X'D

Oh, the tiara, the tiara! X) I forgot about that stone. Congratulations for making me remember it. XD

Also, for the record, I love that last line. D':

N'aw. n_n That's very sweet.

Oh, and Din. :p Gotta love how everyone was just "D:" It was...very scary, though.

So /that's/ what'll happen to Link! :D I'm glad. Poor man deserves it. ;-; That and a ife's supply of wine. XD And omigosh, Nayru's explanation for keeping him alive was so touching; you don't even know. D':

Nicely done!

A bit confusing when the goddesses first appeared between the two Nayru's, but other than that, awesome :)

Aww. So lovey dovey and moral uprightness and things of that nature.

I'm glad that Link turned around in the end.

I love the macho characters that turn out to be big pushovers when appeased.

"Do you think we could stay until after the wedding?" Ha, so funny. I could just imagine Faroe wriggling with excitement and wide eyed as she asked that question.

Now we know why the ToP bearers go stark raveing mad.

I had almost forgotten that Noah was a homunculus. Just goes to show how well you built his character.

I am also glad that Collin and Nayru were reunited.

But I wonder how Noah took it from him?

And I'm sorry, but Link has the flippin Triforce of Power and he gets beaten by a knife? It took the Master Sword and the arrows of light to defeat Gannondorf, and he still wasn't dead! Just seems a little lame and anti-climatic. Sorry.

But the rest was great. I can't wait to read what happens next!

I knew Noah would get his piece of the Triforce in the end. X3

That memory. ;A; It was so...so poignant. I can't help but wonder who "they" are, though...

Also, that part that described Lady Impa...it sounded so mechanical and matter-of-fact; I love it! XD

Wait, so what happened to Link? D: He's okay now, right? Gah...I guess I'll just have to wait and see. XD

...How does one forcibly remove a piece of the Triforce from someone else? Eh, 'eves.

Hm. Lovely chapter, as always, though you could have, perhaps added a bit more description to the Nayru/Collin scene. That, or I'm just tired. XD

Love how Noah was the cooler/better man here... "You'd want me to prove that in the end, we're not so different…" Ooh. Contemplative material.

...And, for the record, that part about Noah using the dagger was really touching. :'D

...Dang o_o Really love the way you've covered the process of each Triforce piece fusing with their hosts :) Pretty cool how each one is different, too :)