love it!

This is a very great start and despite my limited knowledge of the fandom, I want to read more.

I enjoyed this episode, could almost close my eyes and see the characters in it. I like that Peter and El are not the main focus in that last part of the after hours home scenario as with the show. I like the twist of having more than one Neal, although I am not sure of a permanent role, I like the idea of one one Neal.

Something that really stood out for me was Jones and Diana tone in their interview with Jannie, it really brought out the show characters in it. Looking forward to the next chapter and a bit more of Peter and Neal maybe even Kate!