Wow, i'm now really looking forward to the next chapter... :)

I'm also curious about the meeting with the Dantooine council...

I can't imagine that Revan and Bastila will be too happy with them...

I love all the twists you put into this Revan knows from the begining story. My favorite are that Bastila is a nice and firly girl and that Revan has met Mission and Griff before. It should be interesting if Griff will remember Revan when they rescuce him.

This is a very good story so far. I have just barely started playing KOTOR and I've already fallen in love with Revan. I can't wait to see the Dantooine chapters and how the council will react to learning their attempt to reprogram Revan failed miserably. Very very good story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you possibly can.

okay defiantly keep Revan and Bastila together after leviathan...but if you don't is it possible for a return of the sith lord? :D

Good chapter. I definitely think Canderous will be alright with Avner being Revan. I think they can swap war stories. I even read some fanfictions where Revan is a Mandalorian himself who refused Mandalore's call to war because it was not honorable. Maybe you can try that. I wonder if Revan will run across anybody who recongizes him as Revan. Another thing I thought of is they come across Sith Force users and one or more recongize him as Revan and they are still loyal to him, share his gray alignment, and wish to join him to bring down the usurper. Tell me what you think of this. It would be so cool. Keep up the good work.

Knowing Canderous as well as I do it's a safe bet that he will be shocked at first then he will immediately show respect for one of the best warriors in the galaxy.

Nice have raven tell eveyone who he is right at the start that will work well i hope but good chapter see you in two weeks

Mandalorian honor would say that Canderous would follow the strongest, AKA Revan.

Good chaper

I alway woder why jedi do not look for the treat it self insetd sitting ass and duirng nothing

Plues Canderous respent reavn as warrior so he would help him

the way this was setup you almost think Revan was going to claim the was the next Mandalore

He shall either honor revan or attempt to kick his butt note when I say attempt

Keep bastila with the group and possible DSM revan reclaiming his empire?

I think it's a good story so far, just wanted to tell you that Revan informing the Sith guard that he's a smuggler is probably a bad idea. A more appropriate term would probably be shipper, or cargo-runner.

Awesome ending to the chapter so i would have revied on friday but i was lazy and did not login but about the end i feel that i have herd that they know each other before as kids an way good job cant wait till you ip date agin and to make the story real you should try to put all the chartacers stroys lines in

I agree with some of the other reviews; a few scenes of their relationship in the past would be good.

Was an interesting twist, but for the pairing here not totally unexpected. I love stories where those who are 'Light' become blinded by their greatness and believe they can get away with anything, only to later get smacked down...hopefully in this case too.

I am curious, will the crew end up on the run from the Jedi too? Will they seek refuge with the republic forces? Or will they be moving around the Republic, Jedi, and Sith? I'm eager to find out.

The Leviathan depends, would like to see Bastila and the other Jedi's using dark force powers as well as light, so if she doesn't want to learn them from Revan I'd say send her to Malik.

That actually brings up another question, has just the recovery of Revan's memories restored his strength, or just his options of attack and his instincts? If he's not at full power, could he stand up to Malik in the Leviathan, and if he was, what would cause him to retreat without delivering the final blow? Food for thought indeed.

As for sidequests, I'd choose Mission, Bastila, and Juhani. HK's only served as backstory and a way to up his stats in the game, Canderous' seemed just for another light/darkside point, and there was a bit of mixed rumors to the Jolee one.

Bastila's would cause Revan to meet her mother. Juhani's would be a bit emotional and get her to potentially see the darkside in a new 'light', so to speak, if done right. Mission's spans two worlds, three if you include the meeting with Lena...personally, I'm hoping those two get into a fight and wind up in a mud pit. That aside, it has a bonds theme to it, so it could compliment the romance bit...I'm stretching it, I know...Oh! There's also the opportunity for down time while traveling between worlds too, character development and all that jazz.

Thanks for the heads up on the two weeks thing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter then