Meh, it's decent. Meta Knight giving her a sword randomly is kind of...random. And how is she a gamer girl? The anime and the actual Kirby games are two completely different things. Otherwise it's pretty funny although I'm not the biggest fan of your character Emmy. I don't get her design either...oh well at least there's Nago :D

HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL OH MY GOSH WHAT DOES THIS MEAN!?

hehe i'm starting to like this story very much!

Thank u so much! I love this story! Are ur chapters gonna be based on the episodes? (I hope so...cuz it's a really great story!)

Like it :)! just saying ; im sure youll make Emmy comment about MKs face lol xD (because she know how he really loo
l like , like you saif ;D) but again, I can be wrong too.. Oh well, write on! X3

Awesomeness! This is totally awesome! And Emmy (does not want to call her Emms*Shudders*) give Kirby at LEAST one more melon I can't stand seeing(or reading) the poor thing cry!

Nice! But could u maybe add more interactions with the knights? Thx! Cool chapter though! Cnt wait 4 5!

I love chapter 3 Emmy it was great. Keep up the great work.

Cool info! But does this mean no MKXEmmy? Was kinda hoping for that. Anyway can't wait for next chapter! hurry hurry hurry! Lol! :3

I love Chapter 1: Kirby Comes to Cappy Town! Part 1 it was great. Is Tiff and Tuff are going to get together? That will be great. Keep up the great work.

I love the Prologue: Where the Hell am I? it was great.

Thank u! Make chapter 3 soon! Or maybe add some emmyxMK or emmyxtuff! Thx!

When is chapter 2 coming? I've been waiting weeks!

I have been here! ;)
So. What are you going to do with her time here?