Very poignant. It's a fitting afterthought for the main episode. Well written. Keep up the good work!

Well written, good job! Please continue the saga.

Enjoyed the story. Hope to read more soon.

So nice to see a story about one of my all-time favourite episodes! I have always felt there was a lot going on beneath the surface between John and Helena at this early stage in their relationship, and this story eloquently articulates that "something"!