|Reviews for Same Place, Different Time|
| Cool Breeze 5/11/13 . chapter 36
I have to read this again from the start...I think I've overlooked some things. Regardless, this is an excellent story and I'm really looking forward to the, I hope, eventual happiness for Jack and Sue and, again, very hopeful, their little blended family. :) Meanwhile, they have a dynamite friend in Bobby!
| kbf 5/8/13 . chapter 36
Lovely sunny day yesterday, and then I found a new chapter. Perfect.
Sorry I have not been able to comment recently. I wanted to say how touching I found the picture of Laura holding Jilly's hand to speak to Santa Claus to ask for her as a big sister. She must have forgiven her for the tantrum.
I am so pleased Jack and his mother are reconciled. I had wondered whether you had kept Allie in Wisconsin to encourage Jack to talk to his mother, and, by inplication, to Sue.
I am inclined to think I would only use a capital letter if the endearment was in more or less permanent use as a substitute for a name or a nickname.
The 'shabby hotel' sems more likely to be connected to the Lisa strand of the story that being where Sue had been living.
I am still bothered with Jack being described as a security risk in the personnel records Tara read.
Bobby is a really staunch friend. I wish there was a way to provide a 'happy ending'for him.
Sparky bear is back. Hurrah!
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 36
Lower case. I don't cap bc it's not an actual name.
Thanks for writing such a great story!
| 71cottes 5/7/13 . chapter 36
Bobby has done very well to play on his charm on Sue for Jack to stay at.
looking forward to more of this story
| Guest 5/6/13 . chapter 36
| Tangosalsa 5/6/13 . chapter 36
Hmm,curious what's in the bag? Something of value because Jack mounted "Thank you" to the sky.
I just loved the part of the arriving at the house that was supposedly abandoned but as it turned out Bobby really made a nice surprise out of the garden with all those lights. Just lovely and how Jillybean reacted, so sweet she was really mesmerized by it.
The kids are up to bed, Sue and Jack are alone, please let them have the talk of the century. I think it will made things much more clearer for everyone. Jack really felt it when the cabby took the wrong turn and the sat-nav was not working. That part of the town brought back memories of the old apartment were Sue lived.
| 71cottes 5/6/13 . chapter 36
Jack was cold towards Sue and it's a shame and a big thank you to Bobby Jack to put in the right way.
I hope they will be able to trust now and spent a good party
| Zoja 5/6/13 . chapter 36
As to the question... I'm not sure if I don't mix it, but I think I use the capital letter. But it's only because I'm not really sure how I should write those things in English, and it's difficult to judge by the way people write in stories - some of them use capital letter, some of them use small letters.
As to the chapter, a nice one. I would feel horrible in Sue's place, because of Jack's reaction... I'd probably leave, seeing the lack of enthusiasm in him. Still, I'm glad Bobby convinced her to stay. Maybe spending Christmas together will make them try to work on what they have between them, to give something more between them a chance.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| fanka77 5/6/13 . chapter 36
"if there are two people in this world destined to be together, it's you two."
I couldn't agree more!
| Guest 5/2/13 . chapter 35
Wow! I have been waiting for ten days now. Update, update please! I'm begging you. AM. _
| mediamogul 4/27/13 . chapter 7
Finally made the time to read this story-been wanting to for a long time! Each chapter leaves me more intrigued and I can't put it down! My guess is that Sue married tony as an assignment? Perhaps undercover for OPR in the FBI. That way they could keep an eye on him and build a case
| 71cottes 4/25/13 . chapter 35
Now I think we expect another meeting with Sue and long discution enter them two
| Guest 4/25/13 . chapter 35
it is very nice to have put on wisconsin
| 71cottes 4/24/13 . chapter 35
Jack follows Allie to advices and all that is the woman knows
| Guest 4/23/13 . chapter 35
I'm glad you did include a 'Wisconsin chapter'. Very well done. Your stories are always packed with solid moments like these.