|Reviews for Me and You|
| TheMidwestJess 4/3/13 . chapter 6
Ok, I have to ask. Your native language isn't English, is it? I promise, I tried reading while ignoring all the grammatical errors, but I could only get up to this point. If you would like some constructive criticism, here it is. If not, just ignore my review.
Your pace is incredibly too fast. You need to slow down and elaborate on things rather than barely mentioning them and four other things in the same breath. Also, get a beta. Or something. Something that would help with the glaring language issue. You don't even put periods at the end of your sentences, let alone match verb tense or even make complete sentences. This is more like a stream of consciousness than a story. And lastly, I'm sorry, but the plot really isn't all that great without much detail in the story. If it had more detail, the plot might be more interesting, but you just skip so much.
I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, but I feel that as a reader, my opinion needed to be stated so that you're aware of some of the issues with this story. Until/unless you fix the readability, I don't think there's much I can praise about this story.
| lalaloverzz2304 3/21/13 . chapter 13
| Nyanmaru94 3/8/13 . chapter 13
i like the story but the way you write it its like theyre going with the speed of light and its also confusing when one talk and the next one talk in the same sentence...i alredy get used to it but thats my sincere opinion
| bumchu 2/26/13 . chapter 12
| kate 2/22/13 . chapter 1
wow there are married
| Hii 2/20/13 . chapter 5
Seo joon couldn't sleep because of Ha Na he keeping thinking about sex maybe..nice they did it again
| Vin 2/20/13 . chapter 4
They have sex...Ha Na is so embarrass in the morning...Seo Joon is too cute and so is Ha Na I can't believe they have sexxxx
| Gin 2/20/13 . chapter 3
Seo joon jealous at what Ha Na said..They kissed
| Ki hye 2/20/13 . chapter 2
Seo joon is sweet helping her cook...
| Tal 2/20/13 . chapter 1
They are married...I love both of them I miss seeing them Tv keep updating
| Lee oh 2/20/13 . chapter 11
Love it...I wonder if Ha Na is pregnant...Is she? Looking forward to your story update soon
| bumchu 2/11/13 . chapter 11
Update soon I love it!
| bumchu 1/13/13 . chapter 10
| daniiii 1/10/13 . chapter 10
OMG i love it its amazing please finish it :)
| nyanmaru 12/13/12 . chapter 9
Hi, thank you for update, when i finish read the chapter i though "why so short...i cant wait for the next chapter..." im really grateful with you theres just so few love rain fics, hope you update soon