Wow... just... wow. Maybe I... would you mind if I maybe continued this? I would be honored to take up the challenge.

I came across this a while ago and finally decided to read it. Man, am I glad I did! It was really well written and the moment between Calumon and Jeri almost made me cry. :') Keep up this greatness! :)

I never thought Beelzemon could be so sweet. Lovely.

This was a very good one shot. Very nice, very probable situation (if circumstances had been different,) and executed quite well. The characterizations seemed right, and I rather enjoyed it. The comments on the way they seemed to have evolved and such between the Monster Makers in particular were amusing. Thank you for posting, and thank your mind for making it stick, it was a nice little short.

This was pretty cool, welldone. Great idea.