|Reviews for These Days of Dust|
| breakawaymagic 1/5/13 . chapter 17
I know I haven't forgotten, I check up every once in a while. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Take your time, there are things more important in life than fanfiction, as awesome as it can be. I'll be around the internet and writing my own stories. :D
| ccDVS 11/26/12 . chapter 17
Please, Please continue the fic! One of the few Royai that I have found that shed light on their childhood, and a really good one too! I support continuation of the fic! Good job!
| Softballa13tondalayo 11/10/12 . chapter 17
:D It's good to know this story will continue! Hope everything works out on your end!
| WithoutWingsX 11/10/12 . chapter 17
Ok! I will wait...
| rini24 11/9/12 . chapter 17
I haven't forgotten about this fic, lol. I am constantly waiting for months on updates from others. I've been waiting almost a month and a half for one to update and nearly 5 months for another so take your time. Look forward to seeing the next chapter.
| WriterChic6 10/26/12 . chapter 6
Haha i knew it, Master Hawkeye was putting his alchemy secrets on Riza's back. I haven't seen Brotherhood yetbut b/c I practically live on tumblr, spoilers are everywhere..
| WriterChic6 10/25/12 . chapter 5
Yay, young!Royai adorable fluffiness. So Riza's father never told her her actual birth date, interesting. So Roy must have seen it in one of her mother's scrapbooks that Mr. Hawkeye keeps hidden in the library.
I like this and the whole concept really.
Keep up the good work.
| WriterChic6 10/24/12 . chapter 4
Another good chapter. I still feel really bad for Riza.
| WriterChic6 10/24/12 . chapter 3
Please let this turn into a nice friendship and please don't let Riza's father mess it up. Everybody needs a friend and I think Roy and Riza are a perfect match. This was sweet and im glad Riza is opening up to Roy.
| WriterChic6 10/24/12 . chapter 2
Oh, poor Riza. She must be lonely being there basically by herself, since her father wants nothing to do with her. Thank god for Roy Mustang. I just love all the young! Royai in this and I do hope thing get better for little Riza.
This has been writen very well, and I like the story so far.
| thenerdiestprincess 10/21/12 . chapter 16
Your style of writing is so beautiful and unique. I love the way you portray Riza, and allow her vulnerable side to show. Overall, great fic! :)
| Softballa13tondalayo 10/21/12 . chapter 16
| WithoutWingsX 10/20/12 . chapter 16
| gunsandflames 10/20/12 . chapter 16
Wonderful chapter! Seriously, my heart is breaking right now :( I've said it before, but I really love your writing style! No matter what you decide to write, I'll definitely continue to read your works! As Maes would say, "you've got my support"
| DiviningInsanity 10/20/12 . chapter 16
I've been waiting for a while in anticipation for chapter sixteen! I really like the relationship developing between Roy and Riza in each chapter. It would be interesting to see what would happen if she and Roy decided to run away together, and what her father would do.