| Reviews for The Long Haul |
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fighttowin1 8/30/12 . chapter 14Wow! Very intriguing story, it was well thought out, well written and had a wonderful ending. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this delightful adventure! |
fantasdancer 8/27/12 . chapter 14Thank you for the daily updates - I've had something great to read to look forward to each morning. I can see that there's only a little bit left to go - unless you completely surprise us - and wanted to say I've enjoyed it very much. It's great to see Daniel back together again - although I love a little Danny whumping. Thanks again |
fantasdancer 8/26/12 . chapter 13Really well done. This story has taken a whole new direction. I'm enjoying it thoroughly thanks |
fantasdancer 8/25/12 . chapter 12Great chapter. I'm so glad that Daniel is recovering. The princess seems to have matured a great deal as well. So loving your story. thanks |
Guest 8/24/12 . chapter 10 Great story and thanks for the fast updating |
fantasdancer 8/23/12 . chapter 10Another brilliant chapter. You write so well! I can picture the scenes very clearly - a sign of a good writer. Hope they make it back without Daniel getting worse - but he's so sick and tired! |
fantasdancer 8/22/12 . chapter 9Foot rot - eww - yuck. Now we know why Daniel's sick. Poor Sam. What a thing to have to deal with! Another really beautifully written chapter there. Can't tell you how much I am enjoying your daily updates. |
Guest 8/21/12 . chapter 8 loving it so far. hope you can keep up with the daily updates. feeling worried for Daniel as he's sick and hope that princess finds some sympathy |
fantasdancer 8/21/12 . chapter 8Wonderful chapter. Things are finally moving ahead. But will Daniel be able to go any further? He's sick and on his last legs. My review for the previous chapter seems to have disappeared so I'll just repeat that it was great to see jack and the team get to Daniel in time |
Arika Yelsie 8/19/12 . chapter 6Very enjoyable so far. Thanks for the fun ride. I hope you will continue! |
fantasdancer 8/19/12 . chapter 6Alright, def. getting a bit obsessed here. This is the first thing I look for when I turn my computer on in the mornings. THANKS for the daily updates. It's def. worth reading. |
fantasdancer 8/19/12 . chapter 5Another wonderful chapter. I don't know why you haven't been inundated with reviews for this story. Personally I love it. |
Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 4 Great story. It's been ages since I've read a good Danny whumper. Thoroughly enjoying this one. Hope you keep up with the fast updates. Thanks |
fantasdancer 8/17/12 . chapter 4Excellent chapter and beautifully written too. I could almost see the whole thing like live action. That's excellent writing. Feeling deeply sorry for Daniel. Hope he can keep up the pace and dosen't get sick ... then again I do love Daniel whumping. Thanks again for the fast updates |
fantasdancer 8/16/12 . chapter 3Painfully short chapter but also lots of fun to read. Thanks for the fast update |