Good update.

Good stuff!

I'll be waiting for the next installment.

Great chapter Update soon

good , when will they meet Galactica ? I hope soon ,. and they find earth , with an advanced Civilization with Many fleets, Battleships, Battle cruisers, Cruisers, Destroyers ,with Shields, advanced Armour , energy weapons, matter-anti-mater weapons, so that they save the colonies and exterminate the cylons once and for all, cant hardly wait for the next chapter

Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm not familiar with this fandom, but the fact you said "Fleet Week" really caught my attention and made me chuckle. That's totally a Discovery Channel thing and for me makes the story immediately realistic. This was definitely an intense first chapter I wasn't expecting. While I thought it was long due to not being familiar with the fandom, you definitely hooked me and I would not hesitate to return back for more because it's so engaging. I enjoyed that you started this with such a bang. It drew me in immediately and I'm wondering what's going on and why. I'm wondering what's going to happen. I want to know why the ship isn't moving. You did a really good job in all of that. You got me to ask questions and worry about characters I'm not familiar with. Very nicely done. The way you change scenes is very foreign to me. I have yet to see something like that with names preceding their parts. However, it made it easier to follow who I was reading and I really enjoyed that. I also really enjoyed the fact that if the character said Huxton, I was reading Huxton's thoughts and not Radin, Cross or Marlay. Lovely job with that as well. If there's anything to critique, there were a few spots here and there that have a double letter, a missing word, or a speech line wasn't capitalized. In view of everything else however, those are very trivial, because your story is well written overall and well executed. I am interested to see where you're taking this and what's in the future. I will definitely keep an eye out for this.

First off, I am fandom blind. Sorry about that.

Second, the way this is presented is very interesting. The chapters are split into episodes and parts of episodes, remiding me of how people post episodes of youtube into parts. I'm very interested with these characters, particularly Huxton and his stepford mask. I also like how you bold the characters who gain the perspective; it helps the readers understand who's perspective they see. The cliffhanger at the end of the chapter has me hooked, so let's see where this goes.

SPaG:

ttwenty-five should be twenty five.

I'm following this story now.

I hope to read more of this series of yours.

Awesome!

Looking forward to reading more. :)

Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Good updates.

Great chapter, I look forward to reading more?

Good updates. Finally catching up with your story.