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The Sky Hedgehogian Maestro 9/6/12 . chapter 1This is hilarious. No, really. This is hilarious. The reviews are better the actual story. I loved reading about the drama and intrigue you and your "friends." Whom totally exist and are not just you logging off and reviewing yourself anonymously 60 times. As for the story, it's basically just here to provide a backdrop to the ceaseless intrigue of the reviews. In fact, I'm more tempted to review the reviews. No Sonic or friends or anything from the franchiseFictionpress. Fiction. Press. Even if it's a Hedgehog, a two tailed fox, and an echidna, it's not necessarily Sonic and thus can be original fiction. And don't say Twilight either- vampires have been around longer than Meyer, my frien... er... "colleague". "s." Even add Sonic for a one-liner, and it would no longer be rule breaking. Hmm... Here's a thought. Among the fastest growing groups of deleted stories on FanFiction are those that are original fiction, having no elements of any media they're trying to be pay respect to. There's no evidence the characters in this story are even animals, let alone based on the Sonic continuity. Coincidence? Right then. Shall we? |
Gamer 8/25/12 . chapter 1 Ah. |
leroy 8/24/12 . chapter 1 i–i–i just miss you my friend |
Gamer 8/24/12 . chapter 1 Don't cry. |
leroy 8/23/12 . chapter 1 (sobbing) |
Gamer 8/23/12 . chapter 1 *hugs back* |
leroy 8/23/12 . chapter 1 (hugs gamer) |
Gamer 8/23/12 . chapter 1 *eyes widen* |
unknown stranger 8/23/12 . chapter 1 (takes off hood to reveal leroys face) |
Gamer 8/23/12 . chapter 1 I won't harm you. Just tell me who you are. |
unknown stranger 8/23/12 . chapter 1 (doesn't notice gamer) i promise i will see you again i will show you survived the illness (turns around to walk away) (sees gamer gets scared) (curls into a ball scared) |
Gamer 8/22/12 . chapter 1 *hears them* *teleports so he's right behind them* |
unknown person 8/22/12 . chapter 1 (spies on gamer) (whispers) awwwwwww |
Gamer 8/22/12 . chapter 1 *waves goodbye* |
m.h the great 8/22/12 . chapter 1 joker:ALL ABOARD BIRDBRAINS HOO HOO HEEE HEEE HAHAHA m.h the great:goodbye (tear slides down his cheek) (gets on bus) |