| Reviews for The cottage by the sea |
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Toaneo07 Ver2.0 9/10/12 . chapter 1woo Oo |
Amaranta316 8/23/12 . chapter 1LOL... of course a good handle of the crucio spell was going to be impressive for Bella xD... the big endearing maniac she is n_n Whoever had the idea of sensitive strap on is my heroine. My goddess will be the one who brings it to the muggle world xD This was hooooooot!... Hermione as the dominant one always is. I realized this is just smut but boy it is well written. Hope to read more of your stories soon :) |
Guest 8/16/12 . chapter 1 First off can I say how much I liked this story. It was great, I have read it 5 times. :D And secondly this comment is for the person who said about typos, this really annoys me. The review box is for the review of the story not the grammar and "typos" in the story. What are you a school teacher? I've read some of your stories and I've seen a few typos in them but I didn't point them out to you I just left reviews on the story. Only when you are perfect do you have the right to criticize others. I can not wait to read more from you Lady Bellatrix. :D Jenny. |
Guest 8/14/12 . chapter 1 WOW lovely sexy an HOT excellent thanks |
OpheliaBlack 8/15/12 . chapter 1Well, this did have a lot of typos, usually writing 'to' instead of 'too'. However, the smut was nice. |
Rodolphuss.Lestrange 8/14/12 . chapter 1Likeylikeylikey :D Purely hot stuff there :') Well written smut as always and if I'm honest I want more of it! Amazing as always star. |