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zeralda viperia
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Amazing, really stands out from all of the other sirius remus raise harry fics. I love how your remus is so so very dark...
themaskedpostit
2008-11-07 . chapter 10
I know I'm reading this about six years since you stopped writing it (thank God you finished it then because I'd be having conniptions now otherwise) and that you might not even get this review, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this fic. I saw it recommended somewhere a few days ago and, while I've largely stepped away from fanfiction, decided to give it a shot and I'm so glad that I did.

Your writing style is fantastic. It drew me in in the first chapter, not to mention your characterization. It's interesting to see Rowling's books portrayed in a more adult light without all the warm fuzzies that come with children's literature. Of course the characters are going to have regrets and of course things aren't just going to patch up and everyone's going to live happily ever after. Well, maybe they can live happily ever after, but a more realistic happily ever after? I like the 'happily ever after' endings...

I really liked the depth you added to everyone and the reasonings behind their actions that you provided. You really do have a firm grasp of the characters as well as just what makes people tick in general. It was also nice to see a cynical Remus for once rather than the typical happy go lucky professor or the angst-bunny-werewolf. And as silly as it sounds, there really is a lot to be learned from the way you have them cope with their difficulties and with their differences.

Anyway, I hope that even if you aren't still writing fanfiction, that you're still doing some sort of writing because you definitely have a knack for it. I can't believe you only got a hundred reviews for this story. There should've been a lot more than that.
Green9721
2008-06-05 . chapter 10
aw!
Shanya-hp
2007-10-14 . chapter 10
oh my god this fic is so amazingly written! A great piece of art!! love it!
piwqefjk
2007-09-21 . chapter 10
Great story - Almost made me cry at a few points, and I love the way you worked through their problems.
LixXxa
2007-07-31 . chapter 10
i know it's been a million years since u completed this story, but i just wanted to say that i luv it. a lot. i actually read this five years ago, but i think i stopped at around chapter eight. i then i found it again! hehehe. i luv it.
Slasharific
2007-07-30 . chapter 10
While I understand that that is quite a good ending, I think it was too... sudden.
Shiro Ryuu
2006-09-24 . chapter 10
*hugs you* Oh, my. I don't think I've ever read a proper angst in my entire life. I really mean that; this is what teenage angst is /supposed/ to be, because it treats it with respect. For once I found a lot to relate to but DIDN'T wind up depressed myself; I hadn't know that was possible *grin* The way you tied these three characters together, and their myriad relationships past and present, was simply mind-blowing, in an entirely artistic as well as personal sense. Phenomenal, I will remember this. *hug, hug*
MagicalWinry
2006-06-08 . chapter 10
Awesome story!
PervyMonk
2006-06-08 . chapter 10
Marry me! *cough* This fic...wow. Just wow. It was wonderful and lovely and so completely human. A work of art, I tell you. Just...wow...
CosmicMoon
2006-01-23 . chapter 10
I read all of it on Azkaban's liar but I had to put it on my favorite stories list so I wouldn't lose it. D; I love it. *huggles it* Oh my goodness. I almost cried so many times. T-T Extremely lovely read, thank you.

~*CosmicMoon
Nyuufish
2005-12-08 . chapter 1
I realy liked the angling you have, it's interesting with a different pov. ^^ also me like angsty-remus ^^

yay!
Fire Witch1
2005-08-23 . chapter 10
ORO!? End already? Great story! Really sad, but still great.

-Britt ^^
dreamymoonbeam
2005-08-02 . chapter 10
wonderful! so very very good!
next: harry and ron!! :P
*hugshugshugs*
dreamymoonbeam
2005-08-02 . chapter 4
Oh my. I've gotten this far through the story and I'm almost in tears :P. This is amazing. Wonderfully written, incredible character portrayals. I've never thought of Lupin as being like this, but it makes so much sense. The story could have made him seem whiny, but it doesn't, it's just horribly, wonderfully sad. Well well well done. Off to read the rest! :D
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