Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE update soon! This is really good! I can't wait for future chapters! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D

This is FRICKIN AMAZING.
Jasmine flower...humm...xD
I love the mind control thing. I think it'd be something that an actual vampire might have, seeing as they have to catch their "prey" and all.

Awesome story! Is it a one-shot or do you plan on continuing it? It's a great one-shot but it'd be an even better story :) Update soon please!:)