Please update this is amazingly awesomley gOod

write more :)

LOVE IT!

I have enjoyed the story so far. Your idea is unique and i look forward to reading more chapters soon!

What happened? Really? You just end the chapter with 'something happened'. What a cliff hanger!
Ok, I get the timing now. So is Maria the moon princess now? I hope he doesn't fall in love with him. Well... I do like Maria and robin...
Now you've got me all confused! Please update soon!

Your present tense is a bit strange, but I've adjusted now.
Who's Cuen? Do you mean robins father? His name is Coeur, or something like that. (I can't remember the exact spelling)

That was different! They already know each other. Im sure theyed love to get married :)
Well, maybe this marriage will cause more problems then expected.

Very cool idea, but the style is awkward. The tense is off and a few commas and apostrophes are missing.
I'm not being picky, I'm just saying I makes it difficult to read a story if the grammar isnt.
I really do like Raven though. We'll see what she'll do in this predicament...