Beautiful scene. Thank you for this. Also btw, while Elysian Fields is down a bunch of us are hanging out in Chatzy as a kind of support group. PM me for the address if you want to pop in.

Beautifully written! Loved it! Thanks for a great story!

Its taken me all week to finish this story...its been well worth it. On to the final chapter!

Ok, thought I would mid-story review... but I don't want to stop so going on to the next chapter.

This chapter kicked ass btw!

I love how you combine your previous story with this one and add in stuff from the show...its really good!

awe, so sweet and loving. perfect ending

I'm glad they found some peace. It's too bad they don't have that in the main storyline. A lovely ending.

omg,not sure if i've mentioned this previously but i watched the buffy the vampire slayer xxx parody and let me just tell you, it blows. seriously. it does. also literally. but! haha, the like, sexy time montage you wrote here was really good, and unlike in the pronz there is spuffy, which is good.

"Hands in his hair, a small, talented tongue pushing hungrily between his lips, and making him instantly and wonderfully "uncomfortable" in the trousers." favourite line because trousers and uncomfortable in quotes.

also p.s. i'm pretty sure you won, if my tabulations are correct and they are, because i am a mathematician. (no i'm not, dont' ask me to solve your math problems for you)

Well, your other recent fic might have studiously avoided perfection, but you just couldn't help yourself here, huh? If this is mushy, then hell, just bring on the mush. Love these two so much. Buffy without her head up her rear end, and Spike as fierce and mischievous as ever, but being her own personal champion. She might have to save the world every damn week, but at least she finally has someone to save her. Would pull out the phrases I love here, but there are just too many. Oh, and can the broken record just say, one more time, how awesome your erotica is? (Sorry, "smut" just doesn't work - it far exceeds that word - every damn time.) I know finding different angles (hmm, OK, yeah, no layers of meaning there) is a challenge. I'm not sure how, through so many great fics, you keep these scenes so fresh. I do know it takes a lot of thought and work, and I'm always so grateful you choose to share that here.

"I'm a - a small adult. Okay a small adult with flamingo legs, but whatever."

lol oh dawnie

also, i knew this was gonna get M-y

A win-win-win situation: Spike wins Buffy, Buffy wins her lost heaven in Spike, and the reader wins a perfect happy ending.
:)
So, once more with feeling: "Thank you"

Oh Sweet, dearest Sweet..
Right now, I am the one who wants to fall to her knees and weep or worship.. or both at the same time.. for I am torn between joy and sorrow!
Cause,
A. You are about to end this wonderful story.. which is inevitable, I know, but refuse to comprehend
B. You created a perfect boyfriend out of this fiend called Spike, and I am truly in love with him this time
C. You are raising the rating to M

I shall go, lose myself in the final chapter now..

"and he's emotionally adopted you." d'aw, anya (heart)

this is like the opposite of a vicious cycle

i loved this story, how you could really ser their relationship growing and getting Buffy to the point of actually loving him

I'm glad you decided to change the rating for this final chapter. As you said, this is a true love story, and I think this pulls it all together. It has been refreshing to read a story that is focused on a tender, romantic storyline. I'm glad they can find their piece of heaven together :-)