Nicely done.

Im only just getting into Lewis Slash myself. I enjoyed this and hope to see more from you in this fandom. Good work!

Paleom
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Not a fandom or pairing I would normally consider reading but cos it's you...;)
Well written, as usual, and believable as it stands but I'd need convincing this relationship would go any further. That is more to do with my inability to 'see' some slash pairings though and nothing to do with the quality of your writing! For a first attempt at slash, it is more than acceptable!