I really like it :D You should write more!

The concept for this fanfic is really good, I can't wait for more entries :)

William and Peggy make such an adorable couple 3

Really beautiful. Thank you for filling in some lost moments. I do hope you will continue.

That was so sweet! They are definitely my favorite couple! I look forward to the next conversation.

Eeep! More, much more please! That was an absolutely beautiful chapter! It fit seamlessly into the movie too!

You have really captured William's sensitivity and Peggy's shyness in my mind, well done!

Really, really lovely, can't wait for more :)

"but he was so close now, and his striking features overwhelmed her into a reverent silence. "

That line struck me as very poetic and beautiful! I loved this little piece. I hope you update soon! :D

This story is wonderful! Your writing is fabulous; very descriptive and relevant to the time period. Hope you write much more!

This is just wonderful. You've taken great care with the language, creating a mood and a psychological underpinning for the budding relationship between Peggy and William. Restraint and understatement is wholly appropriate here, even with two young people intensely attracted to each other.

I like too that you've touched on their mutual longing for joy and for freedom, for life itself.

Very lovely.