Amazing story great job on this unique story!

very interesting story ne

Very cool. Lots of little subplots that weren't really touched on enough for me to care about.

But that's assuming i would have cared about them anyway. For all I know, you just saved me time.

As for the Ranma/Ranma fight: it was done perfectly. If War Horse knows every MA style and technique ever made, then Ranma would have to rely on the Saotome family's best skill, create a new one.

I was just searching completed ranma fics and I came across this one. I'd completely forgotten that you had written this even though I read it about 5-6 years ago. The second time around was a much better read since I now know who all the random marvel characters in this story are.I'm a fan of pretty much all of your stories, and I think it's cool that you have the range as an author to write the serious stuff as well as the action/comedy. Despite some spelling and grammar errors I would definitely call this a ranma classic. I think it's the only ranma/ marvel crossover that uses the 616 continuity, is complete, and is a actually good. That's a pretty lofty achievement in my opinion. If you haven't already you should definitely give yourself one more pat on the back for writing this one.

This is a really good story, and I admit that I didn't expect it to be. You might want to change the summary if you want more readers. Either way, the only thing that could make this better is if you mentioned, even in summary form, how the battle went without Ranma being War

*sigh*, the position Ranma's in so sucks

Epic.

Very good story. Well written, with a good blending between Ranma 1/2 and X-men.

"With a deadly smirk, Ranma went into a forward horsemount stance, and swung his arms in a wide circle before him, before bringing his hands cupped together, and down to his side. Ranma's battle aura flared, as he began to emit a low, gutteral hum that resonated from deep within him. At the display, the Warhorse shifted into a more visible defensive stance, just in time for his opponent...

to turn tail, and run."

Just decided to read this again, and this awesome scene caught my attention. I have no idea why I never thought of Ryu in Street Fighter V doing a Hadoken until now...

sigh. I miss your fics. Hopefully, Halloween will come with a surprise...

great fic

i totally forgot about this story. It kicks a lot of ass.

I really liked the idea of this, it wasn't super healing or strength that made him the man. But knowing every technique in the universe more or less. Add that to his ability to blend and combine techniques.. it's not hard to imagine the normal toe to toe slugfest type fighters mutants and such end up being losing so badly to him. I think the world was painted a bit dark, especialy to people readers always like.. I mean poor Kasumi. At least it more or less ended well. Either it never happend, or it just never happend in his reality, and he still won in the other.. temporal mechanics is always a pain.

this is a good story I liked how it ended.I was also wondering if you were planning a squil to this story. I was also wondering if I could use this story for a base for a story. Something keep bugging me If the war horse had all this knowlage couldn't he have some how tranfered in to Ranma's body at the point of death and thus be able to subdue Ranma and take over.E-mail me if It is okay

damn, Ranma got picked to be war? Shit. But then again, only Ranma could truely be considered a one man army, heh heh heh heh...

This is great, and better than that, its already complete! YAH!

NEXT CHAPTER!

*marches off to the next chapter*

Finally I got my arse up to finish this story, it had some teary scenes...and it was realy awesome. I was wondering why Iron man would be with the bad guy though.

Pity and wolverine died...sacrifices must be made I guess. And...Carnage is Peter's ex-wife ? Wow it was really unexpected. Anyway I keep thinking why would I find great fics when I'm at the brink of my exams. My final exams for the semester...if I fail I would have to retake it...

Well keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for the next update of Over The Clouds'