PLEASE Upload another chapter! This story is sooo good! I can really see this happening at the end of the film-much better than Esther sinking to her doom at the bottom of a freezing cold icy pond.
So, she wants Max to be her daughter, eh? That is both cute and creepy!

Cute because, Esther, because of her condition, was never able to have children, nor settle down with a family of her own, and I suppose Max in some ways, was more than a sister to her.

Creepy because Esther (although she didn't think she was) was a cold-blooded killer.

Quick question: Who do YOU think is scarier? Esther from "Orphan," or Damien from "the Omen?" Just asking, because I'm curious, I think it's Esther-Damien IS the son of Satan, but Esther-just, well. You know what I mean!

Ohh... this is fantastic. Please update soon! Only one thing- when Esther's punching through the glass, Max wouldn't cover her ears, because she couldn't hear it, but other than that small mistake, this is amazing! I wonder if Max was gone, too... :) This is so awesome!

GET SNOWY!

fantastic :)x