The end was very close to the movie, but at least the final part was new. Thank you for the story! It was awesome and very romantic!

TERRIFIC! A love the whole new chapter to this story! It really adds on! Thank you! You are awesome at this!

Now we are talking! Some new words for the story! I LOVE IT! EPIC!

Sounds a whole lot familiar with that last part. But it is still awesome!

At least there were a few new things about the story. Nice twist. I love the idea!

Nice writing too!

Bad situation! I like it!

Yeah, I think I would be mad too if I was in that position. I could feel her anger and I don't blame her. I think I would have made a scene, but thats just me.

Nice work! I love it! Said it a million times, but I do!

Not bad. But the whole retelling the movie thing is kinda getting old. It's okay, but it's getting a little old.

Still, I love it! You are good!

Again, I love it!

But it sounds like you are retelling the movie a little too much. I know that is your intention, but th story feels like it could use something completely new.

Anyway, I love it! Great work!

NICE! This is way better than it is in the movie! Good work!

I love how things are extended in the love scene. Even with Millie and David expressing their love for each other. I LOVE IT!

At least some of it sounds a little bit new. I like it!

Keep up the good work!

Not bad. I like it!

At least Mark got what he deserved, but the whole thing sounds a whole lot familiar. But then again, this is on Millie's point of view.

Nice work!

Wow that was cool. Nice to see the prequel to a fic, you don't get that very often. lol Millie is such a cool person!