Okay, that dream? Weird. And possibly the most original idea of a force vision I've ever seen. But totally awesome.

And that last line was totally heartbreaking

aw thats soo sweet!

Fantastic, fantastic work! I loved the dream, and the end... perfect! :D

I don't read Star Wars-Fanfiction very much, but I'm glad I found your story. I loved the old movies, but I have some trouble with the new ones.

You did a great job by "connecting" Anakin and Vader, and you made the character very interesting. I think you found some good answers and reasons for Anakin's fall into darkness.

"You could always read me like a book when I didn't want you to, and almost never when I did."
Oh, *excellent*. A great introspective piece, completely in character, and tying the Trilogy and the Prequels perfectly. And I love the dream of the night-club, the two mentors concurring against Anakin. Terrific story.

WOW!

Very powerful story, with a killer ending. I loved it.

Another wonderful Obi-Wan/Anakin (well, Vader) piece! You seem to have their relationship down pat. (I'm making this seem like a slash story, aren't I?) I will definitely be keeping my eye out for more Star Wars stories by you.

Excellent work! Beautifully written with great characterization!

That's a great story! I loved it!